INFINITE

[silver_kite]

Group: Kanjani8
Genre: General; Drama; Action/Adventure; Friendship
Rating: T
Summary: They had an unbreakable bond. They were Club8. But when one member departs, they realise that their friendship will either save or break them.

Comments

[moka_n_waffles]

Oh. Oooh.

I really liked this!!

I loved how we get to know about stuff bits by bits, I love your descriptions of Ace and Johnny and how messed up they are. And your descriptions in general - they're just amazing! It was like I was watching it, I could picture everything in my head because you added so many little details.

And the storyline is pretty interesting! Their friendship is kind of crashed because of the happenings, but probably they'll do everything to stay together and seek for revenge.

Thanks for writing! I'm eager to read the next chapter, so please continue this story! =)

[silver_kite]

Thanks for reading! :) I'm glad you liked it so far.

Yeah, they're all hurting in their own ways but I wanted to make it distinct who was hurting the most. When I repeated PoP, I couldn't help but think of the plot in my head..so I think that was why I played with the descriptions a lot which I don't often do.

Thank you again! <3

[chocbiggestfan1]

oh wow.
it's really intense and the pacing is so good,
it keeps me wanting to read more.
i like the part when ohkura got angry, i could totally imagine it. feels so real.
and i love your 'ai' character.
looking forward to the future chapters! :D

[silver_kite]

naw, thanks dear! thanks for reading :) i think i love ai too. HAHA. i played around a lot, trying to find a name that would coincide with 'ace' ... i thought ace of spades - so ace's sister could be the queen of hearts xD

[askina_spn]

Hi! It's true that it's kind of depressing but I really loved the way you wrote how the feel. I haven't seen UPPERS yet so I can't compare but I can tell you that I loved it and I'll keep reading if you don't mind.
Thanks for sharing.

[silver_kite]

Thanks for reading! :) I'm just scared that if I do get spoiled I'll incorporate it into the story, when I'm semi-trying to make it original. If that even makes sense xD I'm glad that you enjoyed this little piece so far <3 I'll try continue writing it if life doesn't get in the way ;)

[lastingdreams8]

Ace naturally had a dark tan, but when he'd have many drinks he turned a darker colour.
What an interesting detail! Got a bit of metaphor in there too ^^

Oh! And I like that you added that Johnny is married to Ace's sister. I liked that you kept it rather humorous with Toppo around, even when the subject matter was glum.
Good job! :Db

[silver_kite]

Haha. I was playing around with it. Thanks for checking this out, love <3 I needed to include a tiny bit of humour because it was depressing -_-" <3

[sonia_san]

Gyehehehehehe I love it xDDDDDDDDDDDDD

You did this before watching 8uppers, right? but it still feel good!!! Ahhhh I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE THIS FIC, soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much detail!

Keep writing or i'll kill you *just kidding ((>w<))v, but it coz i LOVE your fic <333333333

[silver_kite]

Thanks for reading this, love! :) Yeah, I wrote this before 8uppers was released. I made/had the plot in my head after seeing the 8U trailer and the Prologue of Patch + a visual of the club from club8.jp xD yeah, i'm a geek like that Haha.

I've written about 1/4 of the second chapter, but I'm not sure when it'll be finished. Thank you :)