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harborshore September 6 2010, 16:50:23 UTC
This was really sweet! I'm most fond of the second half--Tom was a little too pushy in the first for my taste, but the ending was great.

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silver_etoile September 7 2010, 01:32:11 UTC
thank you! yeah, tom was a tad bit pushy at the beginning. He should have realized that wasn't the way to land a classy girl like Keltie ;]

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silver_etoile September 7 2010, 01:32:55 UTC
i'm really glad! and did i mention how much i love the art? cause i do! lol. :D

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beachsidebingo September 7 2010, 07:45:27 UTC
!!!
I can't really express how much I love this. The words just aren't coming together like they should for me.
Tom is a tab pushy/cocky. I definitely like him better in the 2nd half when he feels the need to explain he's not Ryan.
I especially like Ryan making an idiot of himself.
Jon would out charm Tom any day.
This made me all nostalgic for Jon/Spencer. With Spencer and his bitchy self. Jon can totally tame the shrew. haha.
I've been out of bandom for what feels like forever. Is Z Berg considered a bandom girl now? I just discovered Gold Motel and Greta is going by Greta Morgan. All so confusing.

Loved it. All the different pieces just come together.
I will look out for the Joncer sequel of this. :D

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silver_etoile September 8 2010, 15:46:07 UTC
yeah, tom's much better in the second half. you have been away for quite some time. I guess Z is...? i dont really know. the lines between bandom and non have been blurring for a while and its hard to tell. anyway, yes, joncer sequel! :D

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onionfish September 8 2010, 12:43:02 UTC
I really liked reading it although I normally don't read non-slash stuff. I even like it after I got yelled at for reading private stuff at work.

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silver_etoile September 8 2010, 15:46:38 UTC
branching out can be good :] haha maybe you shouldn't do it at work, though ;]

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alt_3_etf October 24 2010, 16:05:47 UTC
but there was no Joncer! ah!

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silver_etoile October 31 2010, 13:45:13 UTC
there is in the spin-off/sequel!

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