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silver_etoile

An Honest Mistake

Dec 28, 2006 23:27

Title: An Honest Mistake
Author: roxierose13 (me)
Pairing: Bobby/John (Pyro/Iceman)
Rating: NC-17
Complete: Yes
Disclaimer: All characters in this fic belong to Marvel comics and affiliates. I own nothing and am making no profit from it.
Summary: Rogue knows she can't give Bobby what he needs, so she allows him to go elsewhere. She didn't expect him to ( Read more... )

fanfiction, x-men

Comments 11

hookandeye December 29 2006, 05:17:49 UTC

Really fabulous stuff here. A whole feeling of ... anticipation very prevelant through the whole scene. And the sex! The sex!! Hot! Really nice and in character too!!! Been scouring the net for Bobby/John all day, thanks for this!!

silver_etoile December 29 2006, 05:28:15 UTC

Aw, you're very welcome! And thank you for reviewing, yay for you being the first reviewer :D I'm glad you think they were in character. I've been doing a lot of work on that since my last x-men fic.

wow. calla_comet December 29 2006, 05:26:44 UTC

loved your story! i liked your clever use of the "open relationship" metaphor throughout the story. okay, clearly i should be able to write more and reward you for your story but unfortunately the few remaining brain cells i have are currently short circuiting with images of pretty boys doing naughty things... so yeah. and thank you for the happy ending. there is a lot of angsty pyro/iceman fanfic and while i do enjoy the angst, sometimes you just want the boys to be happy.

Re: wow. silver_etoile December 29 2006, 05:29:45 UTC

Happy endings are my OTP ;) I just love them to death and when it is possible to use one, I will! Yes, pretty boys doing naughty things, yum :D

ireth December 29 2006, 08:26:02 UTC

Oh man, that was absolutely beautiful. So much emotion. You write wonderfully, I can't wait to read more!!

silver_etoile December 29 2006, 17:09:19 UTC

thank you! I'm glad you liked it. It was kind of written on a whim ;) like many of mine, lol.

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silver_etoile December 29 2006, 17:10:18 UTC

haha. i love happy endings too. It's not that I don't like Rogue, but I think she'd be better off with someone else, lol. Plus, Bobby needs John :D

Wonderful eros494 December 29 2006, 16:08:57 UTC

This was amazing. It flowed so well and I like how it was narrated from afar, like someone was looking in on them and telling their story. Great Job!!

Eros

Re: Wonderful silver_etoile December 29 2006, 17:11:08 UTC

thanks! Yeah, the POV was different for me. Usually I avoid writing in present tense, but I just kinda wanted to do it for this one. I think it worked :)