Comments | silver_etoile: A Tale of Two Bookstores (standalone R, multiple pairings)

silver_etoile

A Tale of Two Bookstores (standalone R, multiple pairings)

May 14, 2009 08:31

Title: A Tale of Two Bookstores
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fob, slash, joncer, cobrastarship, fanfiction, patd, mcr, ryden

Comments 22

YOU ARE MADE OF WIN submissionadict May 14 2009, 20:47:40 UTC

so, i read the whole thing, and OMG :D i think i might be a little bit in love with it.

Patrick. just. guh.

and Spencer. that is exactly how you'd act. hell that's exactly how I'D act. <3333333333

i'm not gonna quote for fear of quoting the whole thing in it's awesomeness

and quite possibly you've reduced me to almost speachlessness
there is a part of me that has a soft spot for co-worker!fic. specially with Gerard in it.
exesandohesxo

Re: YOU ARE MADE OF WIN silver_etoile May 15 2009, 06:45:20 UTC

aw, yay! im glad you liked. and you know, you can quote the whole thing if you really need to ;] hehe. i love spencer! he is made of awesome! :D

cocopankakes May 15 2009, 03:36:58 UTC

Sooooo, awesome! Love all the pairings, love all the hillarious will/gabe stuff. I wish I could speak spanish, though. I quess ill just have to guess what dirty things Gabe is saying, lol.

silver_etoile May 15 2009, 06:45:47 UTC

well, you could use an online translator for a rough version, lol. im really glad you enjoyed!

huthuthike May 15 2009, 07:34:25 UTC

Ooh this is interesting :D Gabe cracked me up xDDD Waiting for more Peterick though! 8D

silver_etoile May 17 2009, 05:07:09 UTC

there is more! :D there are two more parts up and linked :D

mostlymailboxes May 15 2009, 13:38:10 UTC

:) love it so far.

there's only one error I've seen:

“Thanks, Bren,” he says, taking the croissant and tearing off a piece. After a second thought, he tears off another and offers it to Brendon, who grins and takes it. “So where’d the new guy go?”

“Jon?” Brendon bounces up on his toes. “He gets off at three-thirty.”

Checking his watch, Spencer sees that it’s three forty-five. He gets off in fifteen minutes.

There's either an error with the time on Spencer's watch, or it should be "He got off fifteen minutes ago."
Unless Jon is a time-traveller. :)

life_not_knife May 15 2009, 23:26:26 UTC

i was just about to comment when i was reading the comments...i think it means that spencer is thinking that his own shift finishes in 15minutes. so Jon finishes ar 3:30,and Spencer finishes at 4:00. But im not sure, could be a mistake too.

Anyways, ive read all the parts now and im so in love with this. Its really addictive, thankyou so much for writing this i was really bored.[even though i should be studying for my A Level exams] oh well!! :D XD yeeeey!

mostlymailboxes May 16 2009, 00:35:14 UTC

Agh, I didn't even think about it that way! D:
I feel silly now.
Thanks for clearing that up. :)

silver_etoile May 17 2009, 05:08:50 UTC

you are correct :] "he" is Spencer. anyway, i'm really glad you liked it and thank you so much for commenting!

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ki_hornet May 16 2009, 10:59:52 UTC

Gabe and William. It was just so perfect. And then poor Patrick. Favourite line of all:
Ohhh,” Gabe says finally. “Well, fuck.”

“Eloquent,” Vicky deadpans. “I can see how you sweet-talked William into spending time with you.”

Gabe grins. “It’s all in the delivery.”
Just wins.

silver_etoile May 17 2009, 05:09:29 UTC

haha i like that line too :D i'm really glad you enjoyed!