Fanfiction

[sillie82]

Title: Distorted Reflection (Thanks for the suggestions guys, it helped a lot. :D)
Rating: Uh, PG-13
Pairing: Nick/Greg (duh. XD)

A/N: Alright, wrote this for the challenge I wrote out at the EFN-forums. Write a fanfic containing the following sentence: 'He ran his fingers across his eyes, and was surprised when they came back moist.' I'm... not

Comments

[stinkymonz]

I'd love to be a beta! I'm brutally honest, to the point of being a jackass!

Anyway, I liked the whole thing. I think I've seen it used before though... can't remember where.

[sillie82]

Heh, that's exactly what I need. English isn't my native language, and I always worry I'm not using it in the right way. :P

Can I sent my stuff to the addy on your info page?

[stinkymonz]

Damn, sorry. I forgot about this. Yeah, you can use the email address on my info page.

[sillie82]

Heh, doesn't matter. Thanks. :3

[aprilmay430]

I'd also be happy to beta this. I've already read through this once, and I didn't see anything that seemed OOC, just a few spelling mistakes.

I really like the way you started with short choppy phrases to indicate Nick's state of shock, and this: By the way, I’m safely in the lab during the night. was a nice bit of foreshadowing.

[sillie82]

Thanks. Do you want to point out the spelling errors here, or do you want me to send it to you? (in the last case, what's your email again? I think I once had it, but I'm not sure if I still do. :P)

And I'm glad you liked it. :3

[aprilmay430]

You can send it to me - jmpedlow @ aol.com.

[sillie82]

Thanks. It's on it's way. :3

[anmani]

Cool.
The shock of seeing somebody looking so dagerously like your loved of is intimidating at best.

I already beta for a bunch of people and I've learned a lot over the time I've been writing. Dialogue is one of my huge issues and I'm ready to burn some of my old fics just because I don't find the dialogue appropiate. So what I'm saying is that I'll gladly help.
/A

[sillie82]

Thanks. ^__^

[michigangirl30]

Like the style/format the story is written in. I think your characterization was great, even Brass was right on.

And the only thing I spotted was a couple of spelling mistakes.

How about "Priceless Original" or something like that for a title?

[sillie82]

Thanks, glad you liked. :3

[slightly_frayed]

So sweet. And oh-so-Nick-like. I shall admit that you scared the heck out of me with the 'blood...souless...dead' thing. Made me think what Nicky was likely thinking. Scary thoughts.

Thank you, ma'am. :)

[sillie82]

You're welcome. :D

And heh... about your icon. I'm probably creeping you out then. XD *loves*

[slightly_frayed]

Nah, I would understand YOUR recognition of Eric's crotch. It only makes sense with the crazy fangirlishness and all. XD I do love you, though.

[sillie82]

XDD