A Dreaming Star - Oneshot

[silkekim]

Title: A Dreaming Star
Pairing: Kyumin
Summary: Kyuhyun is a star
Genre: angst? I’m not sure, I’m really bad at genres Rating: pg
Word count: 700
A/N: I was in an allegorical mood. I don't know what else to say :|

Kyuhyun was floating amidst the stars.

He hadn’t been sure at first, but now it was clear to him.

Below him, above him, surrounding him

Comments

[allmidnighter]

This is interesting. I love metaphors so this caught my eye.
I like how you make the parallel between being a star, a celebrity... with a star in the sky, and how Kyuhyun was a shooting star.
And the use of 'burning out', like it could mean BOTH completely consumed/no longer aflame, and being overworked/exhausted. Good one, that.
The ending was sad.

[silkekim]

I love metaphors too, but I never thought I would be one to write it, and I was actually really nervous about what other people would think.. so I'm glad you liked it :3
I originally wrote this with a happy ending about Kyuhyun being OK as long as Sungmin was with him, but.. It didn't fit with was I was trying to convey. I usually love happy endings the most though T_T

[allmidnighter]

I think the ending is perfect and definitely fits better with the rest of the story than a happy ending would *nods* I'm glad you decided to end it like that, especially what the "today was a busy schedule, though he wouldn’t be singing at all" implied. Idk, it fits more with and enhances the overall message.

[silkekim]

*･゜ﾟ･*:.｡..｡.:*･'(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)'･*:.｡. .｡.:*･゜ﾟ･*
*proud~~~~~~~~*

[slutkyu]

QWERTYUIOPASDFGHJKLZXCVBNM.

THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL. I CRIED. I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE AND I LOVE HOW YOU COMPARED KYUHYUN TO A STAR. SO LITTLE WORDS, YET SO MANY EMOTIONS. I LOVE THIS. THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING.

/MEMS.

[silkekim]

WQERTASDDGHJKLKJHSD I'M SO HAPPY YOU LIKED IT ;w;

[snow_meow]

Such a sad ending.
To be a singer is really different to being a start.

[silkekim]

It really is, isn't it? I feel bad for the idols sometimes, especially those in SME. If it's YG, I guess it's more okay, kekekekeke~

[pensivewanderer]

Lovely metaphor as the storyline! Nice job!

[silkekim]

thank you~ >w< <3

[chocoblood_moon]

I really like the metaphor you made here. Not so often that I would find a good fanfic like this TvT
I love how you open the ending, it left readers interprete in so many ways... I'll have to repeat reading it again and again >< thank you for writing such a good one-shot :D

[silkekim]

thank you~ I'm flattered that it's something you can read more than once :D