This is not a G-Rated poem. But then again, neither is your mother.

[silhouetteofyou]

this is a seduction

Comments

[lost_in_romance]

i think my eyes just got raped by that there piece o' work. but oddly enough, i think i liked it..

the best revolutions start in the bed

que viva la revolucion!
-carmen

[silhouetteofyou]

Oddly? Oh come now, when the revolution arrives, we're all dropping our pants.

And there's nothing odd about it.

[tahiti_tati]

That felt strangely satisfying and slightly illegal...

I'm so confused... meet you at the beach at midnight? No, it's lil' Alex, you pervert. Call me when you're older? No, it's lil' Alex, weirdo. Have any older brothers? No. Whisper me to sleep? No. Marry me???

It's always a good sign when I read something that provokes internal dialogue. Good stuff, darlin. Muah!

[silhouetteofyou]

Satisfying? I'm glad. Illegal? I assure you, it's not.

But here, let me answer your questions.

In reference to your second paragraph:

(1)Yes .... blah blah not paying attention to this part .... (2)okay .... yadi yadi this part sucks too.... (3)never mind them ... blah blah more bullshit ... (4)I'll be right there .... last of the bullshit ... and (5) ABSOLUTELY.

Every time you comment on my journal you find a way to remind me how much younger and off-limits I am. It's disheartening to think my writing inspires such feelings of ... uninterest.

Oh! Speaking of my writing, I've got a piece I'm putting up soon that I think you'll dig. So! Starting thinking of a new way to tell me you're not interested ... ;)

[tahiti_tati]

lol, as much as I love your writing, love...

the thought that I knew you when you were in 8th grade and I was graduating high school always comes back to haunt me...

It's like a little brother who's trying to seduce me, it's just not supposed to happen, ya know?

[tahiti_tati]

but oh yea, bring it on.

[nonbellavita]

i hate reading your posts. i always wish they were written for me.

[silhouetteofyou]

They could be ...

;)

[jmsturn]

That was the hottest poem ever.
Like, really hot.

And I feel weird posting on your livejournal, cause I hardly know you, and all, and now I feel awkward...

Soon it's gonna wain (accompanied by hand motions).

[silhouetteofyou]

hehe, glad it hit where it was aiming. ;)

And you shouldn't feel weird, man. I commented on your posts! 'Cause I figure, I may hardly know you now, but this is as good a way as any to start getting acquainted ...

And with that:

"Soon it's gwonna wain, I can twell ..."

[b0rkedmuppet]

man, what kind of night did you have?
-c