This was excellent!! The pace was very patient and methodical, much like I'd expect Itachi to be. Though "he is aware", that awareness didn't stop him from feeling sentimental. And there was enough of an acknowledgement between him and Deidara (without going TOO sentimental) to be believeable. I'm not that much of an ItaDei shipper, but I could definitely read it both ways.
And the sky did the crying for him. OMG that was perfect.
Did I say how great this was? ♥
Yay for fellow Filipinas! Well, Filipino-American over here. *waves* I'm glad I'm not the only Filipina who writes (Naruto/etc.) fanfic! ^_^b
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Deidara, why did you have to DIE? *wails*
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*wails with you*
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I miss Deidara, too. **hugz Deidara plushy**
Itachi is emo... **pats Itachi plushy** I hope he's not the next to get offed; I'd sulk for a week extra (stil sulking from Deidara, I am).
I really liked it...pardon my incoherience of putting words together. ...Yeah.
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And the sky did the crying for him. OMG that was perfect.
Did I say how great this was? ♥
Yay for fellow Filipinas! Well, Filipino-American over here. *waves* I'm glad I'm not the only Filipina who writes (Naruto/etc.) fanfic! ^_^b
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Fellow Filipina, may I add you as a friend?
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*checks your page* OMG YOUR DEITOBI PICTURE IS AWESOME! ♥!! I don't speak Tagalog very well (or at all), though I can understand a little. :D
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Tagalog is still my strong language, though.x3
Well because I just got here last April.
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Thanks! Glad you liked it!
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