Bah. Deidara is a good thing to focus on. *rabid fangirl*
And that was beautiful. I nearly cried myself, and it takes a lot to make me cry. It seems like he died so long ago, but it's only been a few weeks... Everyone moved on and got caught up in the whole Pein-Blue-Tobi thing that's going on. *sigh* But I'm still in mourning...
This fic will suck so bad; I'm not a writer! Suck? As in 'sucking to please Durai_sama', right? Because it definitely pleases me!
It's beautiful. Just beautiful art. I swear I'd be in snaps_4_snarky's position if I had tear ducts ;_;
<--- Is so appreciative he's pelvic-thrusting you You personified Deidara so well. His final art and reference to pairing with Sasori-I'm morose now.
There are so many lines in this fic that ask to be quoted and loved. He marvelled at that pair; he admired its artistic composition, how it worked, how everyone, who’d looked into them, had fallen prey to defeat.
It was probably his biggest critic. Probably. That's it; I'm putting you in my pocket and you're never leaving and I'll never take my pants off.
Deidei is SO deserving of that focus. Especially if it's you placing that emphasis <3! You're absolutely luff.
I practically double-checked everything last night. My face was practically glued to the screen and my dad was looking at me like: 'wtf is wrong with you?'
Anyway, glad you liked it! I know I said that already.-_-;
*__* Deidei. Oh why did he have to die? ;__; Very well written :) Not only you got SasoDei hints but also ItaDei's XDD
Would Deidara be happy if I told that I believe that this sad look Itachi showed us in one of the latest chapter was not for Sasuke (Itachi-kun seems to be well informed where his little brother is and what he's doing) but for Deidara? *sniffsniff*
I think that one of these short stories should definitely explain why both Uchiha have around themselves blue-eyed and blond haired guys (maybe not very intelligent, but definitely loveable) who talk in a strange manner and are rather impulsive. Plus, both are like 'One day I'll be better than you, Uchiha. Just watch me'. XDD Just a coincidence, huh? :P
This fic will suck so bad; I'm not a writer! ~ Don't say that~ No Disclaimers like that :P
And, sometimes, short is a good thing ^_~
"I really tried hard to put myself in Deidara's position" - and I think you really did. Reading the actual chapter I remember feeling like I understood - up to a point - on how Dei felt. And, I think, you captured it here. Showing, in a sense, just why, even just a taste, as to why he really "hated those eyes".
And, the very last line? Oh, that's a perfect last line. Perfect way to wrap up Dei's thoughts. First with the blast, and then with that.
I really liked this :D! Captured Dei very well, methinks.
....why am I wibbling? I haven't even read the Sasori chapters!!!
And yet, this fic KILLS with amazingness. I have been trying to get into Deidara's head with the whole Sharingan thing but it doesn't work because he's not singlemindedly obsessed (like Sasuke), he cares about his art as well. THIS cleared it right up for me:
Sharigan. It was probably his biggest critic.
♥ And also:
‘I’m coming, Danna.’
*sniff* Akatsuki have feelings too, dammit! Stop killing them off Kishimoto. T_T
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And that was beautiful. I nearly cried myself, and it takes a lot to make me cry. It seems like he died so long ago, but it's only been a few weeks... Everyone moved on and got caught up in the whole Pein-Blue-Tobi thing that's going on. *sigh* But I'm still in mourning...
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I miss Dei.
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Suck? As in 'sucking to please Durai_sama', right? Because it definitely pleases me!
It's beautiful. Just beautiful art.
I swear I'd be in snaps_4_snarky's position if I had tear ducts ;_;
<--- Is so appreciative he's pelvic-thrusting you
You personified Deidara so well. His final art and reference to pairing with Sasori-I'm morose now.
There are so many lines in this fic that ask to be quoted and loved.
He marvelled at that pair; he admired its artistic composition, how it worked, how everyone, who’d looked into them, had fallen prey to defeat.
It was probably his biggest critic. Probably.
That's it; I'm putting you in my pocket and you're never leaving and I'll never take my pants off.
Deidei is SO deserving of that focus. Especially if it's you placing that emphasis <3!
You're absolutely luff.
Thank you so much!
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yay!
I practically double-checked everything last night. My face was practically glued to the screen and my dad was looking at me like: 'wtf is wrong with you?'
Anyway, glad you liked it! I know I said that already.-_-;
*adds friend*
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Really. I'm so glad
Let's keep in touch ^^;
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Very well written :) Not only you got SasoDei hints but also ItaDei's XDD
Would Deidara be happy if I told that I believe that this sad look Itachi showed us in one of the latest chapter was not for Sasuke (Itachi-kun seems to be well informed where his little brother is and what he's doing) but for Deidara? *sniffsniff*
I think that one of these short stories should definitely explain why both Uchiha have around themselves blue-eyed and blond haired guys (maybe not very intelligent, but definitely loveable) who talk in a strange manner and are rather impulsive. Plus, both are like 'One day I'll be better than you, Uchiha. Just watch me'. XDD Just a coincidence, huh? :P
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I couldn't help myself, without slight ItaDei hints this fic would be..afjlhadjiheufh.
Anyway, better place in ItaDei in the pairings. X3
Waah! I ♥ that part of that chapter! I thought of that, too! ;_;
I was going to do a fanart about that chapter...
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And, sometimes, short is a good thing ^_~
"I really tried hard to put myself in Deidara's position" - and I think you really did. Reading the actual chapter I remember feeling like I understood - up to a point - on how Dei felt. And, I think, you captured it here. Showing, in a sense, just why, even just a taste, as to why he really "hated those eyes".
And, the very last line? Oh, that's a perfect last line. Perfect way to wrap up Dei's thoughts. First with the blast, and then with that.
I really liked this :D! Captured Dei very well, methinks.
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Thanks! That means a lot! Glad you liked it!
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And yet, this fic KILLS with amazingness. I have been trying to get into Deidara's head with the whole Sharingan thing but it doesn't work because he's not singlemindedly obsessed (like Sasuke), he cares about his art as well. THIS cleared it right up for me:
Sharigan. It was probably his biggest critic.
♥ And also:
‘I’m coming, Danna.’
*sniff* Akatsuki have feelings too, dammit! Stop killing them off Kishimoto. T_T
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♥♥♥ Thanks! Glad you liked it :D
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