Ficcy poemy thinky thought type thing.

Jan 07, 2010 02:41

Title: Enraptured.
Fandom: Stargate SG1
Pairing: Sam/Jack
Summary: When he looks at her he sees so many things.

Under the florescent flickering of the machines in her lab... )

jack o'neill, fic, sam, poems, stargate, sj

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bekki_beekeeper January 7 2010, 19:56:45 UTC
Ah, I just love how each stanza builds up such a distinctive atmosphere of its own. Beautifully lyrical without distracting from the real point - how Jack sees Sam. And then the ending! You draw it together so neatly and so poignantly, I love it.

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silerswench January 12 2010, 20:34:24 UTC
Thank you for such a sweet review :) glad you liked it x

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