Livejournal
Log in
Post
Friends
My journal
silerswench
Ficcy poemy thinky thought type thing.
Jan 07, 2010 02:41
Title: Enraptured.
Fandom: Stargate SG1
Pairing: Sam/Jack
Summary: When he looks at her he sees so many things.
(
Under the florescent flickering of the machines in her lab...
)
jack o'neill
,
fic
,
sam
,
poems
,
stargate
,
sj
Leave a comment
Comments 2
bekki_beekeeper
January 7 2010, 19:56:45 UTC
Ah, I just love how each stanza builds up such a distinctive atmosphere of its own. Beautifully lyrical without distracting from the real point - how Jack sees Sam. And then the ending! You draw it together so neatly and so poignantly, I love it.
Reply
silerswench
January 12 2010, 20:34:24 UTC
Thank you for such a sweet review :) glad you liked it x
Reply
Leave a comment
Up
Comments 2
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment