The Reaper’s Court

Apr 30, 2010 21:57

I really wish I could write faster than I do. I tend to over-think characterization, then I wind up working on a little piece like this for three days. Well, that and I didn’t realize it wasn’t actually going to turn out that little after all, lol. I really didn’t expect this piece to be 1000 words. But you have no idea how long I kept toying with ( Read more... )

character: undertaker, character: william t. spears, character: grell sutcliff, oneshot: the reaper's court, character: ronald knox, fandom: kuroshitsuji

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l_sempiternal May 1 2010, 04:56:28 UTC
Wow. That was fabulous. Each character felt spot on, and there was a real sense of tension in Grell's trial. Bravo!

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silenttaiyoukai May 2 2010, 22:17:21 UTC
I'm very glad they all felt in character. Thank you very much! ^__^

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amanuensis1 May 1 2010, 13:00:00 UTC
Oh, some seriously fun stuff here. I love the resiliency of reapers that lets William hit Grell on the head so callously, and the last line was a hoot.

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silenttaiyoukai May 2 2010, 22:19:18 UTC
William never misses an opportunity to hit Grell, it seems.... :P Thank you, glad it was enjoyed :D

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neocloud9 May 1 2010, 14:38:34 UTC
Haha, awesome!

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silenttaiyoukai May 2 2010, 22:17:52 UTC
Thanks! :D

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rey_de_siestas May 15 2010, 05:14:37 UTC
You are a fantastic writer. The sheer level of imagery in your stories makes me completely lost every time I read one, but this one absolutely takes the cake. I could see and hear and get a feel for everything, almost like I was there. Everyone acted like themselves and everything felt so...real? Is that the right word? Either way, I don't usually give a oneshot such a long comment, but in this case I feel like I have to.

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silenttaiyoukai May 16 2010, 10:12:00 UTC
Aw, thank you so much! I'm glad that everyone felt in character, and that you enjoyed the story! :D

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