which one is better?

[silentsunshine7]

Anyone have any suggestions as to which essay I should use for Brown?
The prompt is: who interested you in Brown? (500 character limit)

Comments

[atomicpirate]

def the second one.

[bless_her_heart]

I'd go for the second one.

[silentsunshine7]

Yay! Especially since that's the shorter one, so it means less editing for me. Thanks guys!

[flyingfish06]

agreed with above - the second one. it shows a lot more about you, and your taking initiative.