For pyramidhead316

[rosehiptea]

Title: Sin of Commission
Recipient: pyramidhead316
Author: darkmistyday
Pairing: Vincent x Heather
Warning: Explicit content

Comments

[pyramidhead316]

Ooh, that was a nice, dark fic! ;D

I really thought it was Heather at first, that was in the church. I didn't expect it to be a manifestation of the town's. O_O

It looks like Vincent is starting to awaken to the town's nature. In the game, he was still a true believer, even if he wasn't a nutcase like Claudia. But here, he's starting to have doubts about the town, and refers to the town as being "an evil place". That's an interesting story idea, one I'm not used to seeing explored frequently in stories.

Good job! ;D

[countingmagpies]

that was sad. moreso than i expected, and i love it. to see vincent slowly realizing that the town isn't what he thought it was, i love this concept.

[rosehiptea]

This was really great. I love how you conveyed Vincent's realization that religion in Silent Hill is threatening rather than comforting. And the sex scene was hot, with just the right edge of disturbing.

[niena]

I almost feel like this is the perfect Silent Hill pairing fic: insane, a bit disturbing, and altogether unnerving. You could almost put it in the context of the game and it'd still make great sense.

I thought this was absolutely amazing.