Dystopian Hearts

Feb 09, 2010 23:03

Title: Dystopian Hearts
Rating: R
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Disclaimer: Fiction. The characters Sam and Dean Winchester belong to the CW and Eric Kripke.
Warnings: Swearing, drinking.
Spoilers: None.
Summary: Sam didn’t often think of them as in a relationship-they weren’t like that. They weren’t order and nicely-classified like that. He and Dean, they ( Read more... )

drabble, sam, sam/dean, fandom: spn, dean

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raths_kitten February 9 2010, 23:31:38 UTC
Oh boys. So dysfunctional yet sexy. ;)

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silentpoetry1 February 10 2010, 07:40:35 UTC
<33 They really are the whole package..

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aisalynn February 10 2010, 02:19:26 UTC
Like light rays that caught their exposed necks and curled with their ears, they touched. Teeth to neck, teeth to lips-bitten and bruised raw and wanting in all the right places.

Nice. Love that imagery there.

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silentpoetry1 February 10 2010, 07:40:48 UTC
Thanks very much <33

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murron February 10 2010, 20:30:23 UTC
This is quite beautiful! Dense and poetical and complex.

I love that little line: They weren’t order and nicely-classified like that. It sums up the reason why the characters work for me.

I like the combination of images and contradicting, stark emotions, too.

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silentpoetry1 February 11 2010, 12:19:07 UTC
:D Thanks so much! So happy to hear that you enjoyed this! And yes-- totally the reason why I like them, too. <333

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smallnstealthy February 10 2010, 22:13:36 UTC
Oh wow, I totally loved this. You did excellent with the prompt!

And sometimes-sometimes it wasn’t a habit, but an addiction. They went through withdrawal and everything-dystopian hearts and skinny wrists. Then they got drunk, fucked angrily and callously, and let the cycle repeat itself into the next week.

GOD! UNF! I LOVE THIS PART SOOOOOOOOO MUCH! ♥

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silentpoetry1 February 11 2010, 12:20:18 UTC
THANK YOU. :DD Thrilled that you liked this! Especially that part! I like that the best, too. <3333

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roque_clasique February 11 2010, 01:08:14 UTC
Mmmm I like this. Totally dependent and fucked-up and high on one another.

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silentpoetry1 February 11 2010, 12:21:06 UTC
Thanks so much! That is totally the perfect summarisation. <33

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