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Portraits of the Free Life (2/7)

Jul 30, 2009 18:16

Title: Portraits of the Free Life
Author: silentpoetry1
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Jared/Jensen (Jensen/OMCs, Jared/OMCs)
Summary: Jared is a cynical streetwhore who's been living in the underbelly of the city for two years while he saves up to go to college. He's a prominent figure on the streets where most people know not to mess with him. But when some new, ( Read more... )

fic: portraits, fandom: spn

Comments 15

2sexyboys July 30 2009, 09:19:55 UTC

Oh Jensen...You are too naive for this kind of life. Jeff you bastard, using Jared to get Jensen to do what you want. Jared save Jen.

silentpoetry1 July 30 2009, 13:52:54 UTC

Hee, yes! He is very naive. And Jeff may be a bastard, but he's a smart one, right? ;)

apieceofcake July 30 2009, 10:30:56 UTC

Poor Jensen , I wanna wrap him up in cotton wool and keep him safe!

Poor boy gives half his money to Jared , then pays for a room, then gets caught by Jeff :-(

silentpoetry1 July 30 2009, 11:12:05 UTC

I think Jensen would appreciate that! The city gets very cold at night. *g* And he isn't having the best luck right now, is he? Thanks for reading!

ariadna_86 July 30 2009, 13:49:15 UTC

Poor Jensen, he's too sweet and naive to live on the streets.
He's having such a bad day... I just wanna give him a hug and keep him away from Jeff!
Great story, looking forward to more!

silentpoetry1 July 30 2009, 13:53:43 UTC

Certainly seems that way, doesn't it? Hee, yes, he isn't having a very good day. :D I'm glad you're liking it!

wearepeople July 31 2009, 11:12:26 UTC

lol ellie... wtf

but yer ice skating tomorow haha (no one will get that *shiffty eyes*)

silentpoetry1 July 31 2009, 11:15:14 UTC

Dude. LiveJournal. Not Bebo.

wearepeople July 31 2009, 11:16:13 UTC

yes i know. i just thought i would remind you so you dong forget fucker (:

wearepeople July 31 2009, 11:16:30 UTC

dong? dont*

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tygers July 31 2009, 13:41:26 UTC

You've probably had enough of me singing your praises over this one, but when I was reading this again something struck me. Jared is the wise street kid, but one with a certain goal in mind. This is contrasted with Jensen, a product of Suburbia, who is really sort of the aimless wanderer. The dynamic that you've established between the boys is Just so interesting. Awesome! But why are you reading this? Go write! Cheers!

silentpoetry1 July 31 2009, 14:09:55 UTC

Hee, I am a very insecure and selfish person, I kind of love praise way too much. ;) And, yes! It's so awesome that you picked up on that! I was actually considering it earlier, and I noticed that a lot of my stories have themes of freedom inside them. Probably because wandering and freedom are such interesting concepts to me. But, hee, yes! Their dynamic is a little odd. But Suburbia isn't exactly kind and nor does it feel free.

*grumbles* Yes, yes, I'm writing. :P