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you don't feel me here anymore - arthur/gwen - g

May 02, 2010 00:02

Title: you don't feel me here anymore
Author: charmx_serenity
Rating: G
Pairings: Arthur/Gwen with figments of Arthur's imagination of Lancelot/Gwen.
Warnings: Character death.
Disclaimer: I don't own Merlin.
Summary: A one-shot I wrote while listening to Broken by Seether (ft. Amy Lee).
A/N: This not what I do on my free time (because I am by no means "free") but I ( Read more... )

pairing: lancelot/gwen, rating: g, genre: angst, fandom: merlin, length: one-shot, pairing: arthur/gwen

Comments 15

kanjo_girl May 1 2010, 17:01:35 UTC

How heartbreaking! Your voice in this fic made me lean even further towards the computer screen. lol. The emotions thrown about seemed to fit and I loved Arthur's perspective. It would have been nice to see his POV throughout the whole fic, but I see why you placed hers in there too.

Thanks for sharing! It was nice.

charmx_serenity May 2 2010, 15:25:37 UTC

I couldn't resist putting Gwen's perspective there too because I want to put across how these misunderstandings are causing so much heartache for both of them. =D Thank you for your amazing comment. =D ♥

s11235 May 1 2010, 17:35:48 UTC

Omg! This was awesome and also incredibly depressing (but in a good way) poor gwen!!!!!!!! Gaaaarrrr at the misunderstandings!!! You had me gesticulating at the monitor which equals total win in my books. Even though it was a short fic I got very into it.

charmx_serenity May 2 2010, 15:24:18 UTC

Ooooohh. Thank you so much. Your comment had me grinning like crazy. It always touches me whenever my readers feel that emotion that I was trying to portray. =D Thank you so much. ♥

noodlesishere May 1 2010, 18:30:37 UTC

Oh Arthur you prat!
Seriously good writing of emotions.

charmx_serenity May 2 2010, 15:15:31 UTC

&& LOL at the first part of your comment. I fully agree. =D
&& thank you. =D ♥

sgmajorshipper May 1 2010, 19:29:23 UTC

*shudder*
*sniff*
BB. You killed me with this...oh wow. *sigh* You really, really, really should write more like this. It's just so heartbreakingly angsty but still beautifully done. Poor Arthur can be so dense sometimes. *sniffs again*

charmx_serenity May 2 2010, 15:13:47 UTC

Oh, BB, don't cry. *hugs*
&& thank you. I guess angst is my genre, then. =D
This comment means a lot, coming from you. =D ♥

reseda_3067 May 1 2010, 20:26:47 UTC

Though it was beautifully written, it made me choke up, with tears filling my eyes.

I wish I could say more, but this made me so sad, I need to collect myself...

charmx_serenity May 2 2010, 15:14:38 UTC

Aw, I'm so sorry for making you cry! That wasn't my intention. Really. But I'm glad you thought it was beautifully written. =D ♥