FIC: Everything's Faster when Standing Still for spn_harlequin

Sep 02, 2007 19:27

Title: Everything’s Faster when Standing Still

Author: Andrea

Pairing/Characters: John/Dean/Sam

Rating: NC-17 or FRAO, whichever

Warnings: Umm…slash? Does that count? ;) ... and incest, but not (see notes)

Prompt: The Maid and the Millionaire ( Read more... )

genre: au, genre: slash, fandom: supernatural, `my fanfiction, pairing: john/sam/dean

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elektrik_storm September 5 2007, 15:14:15 UTC
great harlequin fic! :P hope you don't mind me friending you!

xx

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silentflux September 5 2007, 17:53:46 UTC
*grins* Thanks! This made me nervous since it was my first harlequin fic, my first SPN fic (posted at least), and my first threesome fic! Whew! A lot of first rolled into one in this post ;)

And no, I don't mind you friending me at all! :) I'll friend you right back!

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dontmembersam September 18 2007, 16:35:40 UTC
Oh man you give good Papa Winchester! I was so hoping someone would write John/Sam and then you did it one better...*swoons to images of the Dean sandwich I took to therapy today for lunch* Going to read more of your stuff now.

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silentflux September 20 2007, 04:42:23 UTC
Awww... *blushes* Thanks, sweetie! That makes my day that you enjoyed it! :) *hugs*

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denyce October 25 2007, 16:06:11 UTC
OK very YUM! & very enjoyable! My only critique/complaint is it was tied up too quickly. You had great voices & IMO in character, of out of character in an au piece. Though after Sam's introduction things moved too fast--well here's the thing I really enjoyed it and just wanted/craved more, so yeah a teeny bit rushed basically because I'm greedy. In other words great job!

This doesn't make it easy to pinpoint a fandom/pairings for my SwC ;-)

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silentflux October 29 2007, 22:57:31 UTC
Thank you, sweetie! :) I'm glad that you enjoyed it :) And I know it seemed to tie up quickly...but I was contemplating continuing this at some point in time in the future. Maybe. If my muse cooperates. :D

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apprendista November 18 2007, 14:27:51 UTC
I'm gonna start out by apologizing, because I realized this morning (after about the 15th time I've come back to re-read this it's so good) that I'm a flake who never commented on this *facepalms*

Every time I read this, you blow me away. The depths you give Dean, the fears he never admits to out loud, how deeply he falls without letting himself realize it, and what he finally allows himself to feel once John and Sam convince him he's wanted--it's so beautiful. This is a truly incredible story, and I love how you met the spn_harlequin prompt. I think my favorite line that expresses Dean is, "Surrounded by John and Sam, Dean floated--safe, cherished, loved. And he will swear whatever oaths are needed afterward that he did not cuddle. Not at all. Never. Dean is not a cuddler."

Wonderful job :-)

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silentflux November 19 2007, 02:42:46 UTC
Wow... *blushes* Thanks so much, sweetie! This...is so awesome :) I'm so ecstatic that you enjoyed my fic so much! I was totally unsure when I posted since I'd never done SPN or threesomes before in a fic, so... yeah. This made my week! Thanks again for taking the time. :)

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debarouchi February 4 2008, 22:23:44 UTC
Wow, first threesome??Awesome for your first attempt. Loved the story, loved the tension building between Sam & Dean that was so different to the tension between Dean & John.

Saving to mems, thanks for sharing :)

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silentflux February 8 2008, 06:14:39 UTC
Thank you so, so much!! *beams* I'm so stoked that you liked it! ;) And I'm so happy that you enjoyed the tension I tried to build between the three of them. I wanted to try something some of the other fics I've read, and I'm glad you think it worked! *grins like any idiot*

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