Fic: In Orbit

[silentdescant]

title: In Orbit
pairing: Adam/Tommy
rating: R
words: 880
warning: beating (referenced during aftercare), blood, Dom/sub
summary: Tommy closes his eyes again. He can feel Adam’s presence like a buzz in his periphery, a hum of energy and life and Adam. He smiles.
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Comments

[pyrosgf]

I read Happenstance first... and while I normally read anything and everything, it bothered me. It almost reached that 'too much' line for me and that's very unusual. Still though... it's very thought out and very well done.

After reading this piece and seeing it as a whole I don't feel as bothered by it for whatever reason. Apparently add a little blood and my brain is kosher with the rest. Either way lovely job. Thanks for giving me a taste of something that was very near over what I thought was an endless boundary.

[silentdescant]

Hmm. Well I'm glad something about this fic made it okay! I wonder (and this is just idle curiosity, you don't have to answer or anything) if it was because of seeing subspace from the Dom's POV that made it hard to read. Thank you for your comment!

[pyrosgf]

You know, you might be right... you don't normally see it from that point of view. It hit a little harder.

[thrace_adams]

The aftercare here is really well done. It's one of the most important parts and you handled it beautifully. Great companion piece.

[silentdescant]

Thank you so much!!

[ratbert71]

these two parts rocked my world. You did a great job on them.
incredibly intense, but I could feel the love woven in that
really made this extra special. Heightened the experience.