Fic: Heart-Shaped Box

[silent_snark]

Title: Heart-Shaped Box
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Set after "The Itch" so all appropriate spoilers apply; check yes for angsty sex, foul language and other naughty things.
Summary: Smutty smut. I've outdone myself.
Disclaimer: You know I don't own them. If I did, we'd be making porn.
Feedback: Yes, please. I've been obsessing over this in various forms

Comments

[dreamsofspike]

mmmmmm... sooo hot :) love this, hon, the characterizations are perfect, and the emotions so real and raw... just loved it... and i'd love to see the next night too, btw ;) hehe

[silent_snark]

I'd never before attempted anything like this, so I was really nervous about posting it. Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it!!!

[london_fan]

I love it. I absolutely love it! This is by far the best birthday present I've gotten in forever! And NOOOO, I'm more than happy that you wrote me the "filthy" story! ♥

I already told you how much I love the first part and I really LOVE the complete story! Now I understand what you meant with "more angsty and layered"! I love the end so much. The "missing" condom is something I didn't expect, but that's exactly how I could imagine a House/Cuddy baby being conceived. No talking or planning in advance, but just THIS! This is so in character. ♥

There's definitely room for a sequel... *hint-hint*

[silent_snark]

You're very welcome! You have no idea how relieved I am that you like it! I've been nervously fixated on this for... oh, ever... thinking that you'd be repulsed and delete me from your flist immediately after reading it. (Okay, that's a slight exaggeration but not much.)

I'm kind of toying w/ the idea of a sequel, but you know how slowly I write. The potential does exist, though.

Thank you for not hating it. :)

[london_fan]

Oh dear, I'd friend you a thousand times more just for this, honestly! I still feel so touched that you did this for me in the first place and the outcome is absolutely amazing. You know how much I love your writing and this story just proves your talent again! This is perfect, just perfect!

Well, you know when my next birthday will be! Is that enough time?!? Hey, just kidding, I won't get demanding on you! ;)

Oh, shut up! *glowers mock-threateningly* :)
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[silent_snark]

I can't predict when perversion inspiration will strike again, but I promise to let you in on it, when it does.

Thank you for being one of my biggest cheerleaders! :)

[hrcsen08pres]

This is very good! I'm glad you posted it!

[silent_snark]

Thank you!

[avidreadergirl]

perfect.

Just perfect, you are an amazing writer. that was... so vivid and hot and complex... and I stand by the raymond chandler comparison the images are so vivid and in character and prefect. I keep saying that because it really is.

I would love to read a sequel (as long as you also keep working on BLP)

Congrats!!

[silent_snark]

I probably would have abandoned this or, at the very least, written it completely differently if not for your encouragement. Thank you for convincing me to follow my voice. Your help was invaluable.

Give me a few days to switch gears, then I'll start working on BLP again. :)

[lucyvanflick]

"Amazing" doesn't even quite describe this story. House finally snapping in jealousy (at Wilson, no less!) as well as him and Cuddy finally succumbing...oh wow. Now I won't be able to think rationally for the rest of the morning. :P

[silent_snark]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!