Oneshot: To meet in Kaon

Jan 16, 2013 14:18

Beta: As always the wonderful Starfire201

Verse: pre-war,  AU
Rating: PG
Words: 2,721
Warnings: noneSummary: The Golden Age is long over in these parts of Kaon and yet the hope of a new age hasn't come. In a nameless bar the owner notices a new visitor...

Was written as kind of a social study months ago. I forgot to upload it, though... ;)

To meet in Kaon )

character: prowl, character: jazz, transformer, pre-war, oneshot

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wicked3659 January 16 2013, 14:45:23 UTC
very interesting story, I really like the set up and delivery and the characterisations, are you planning to continue?

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silberstreif January 17 2013, 03:38:15 UTC
Thanks for the comment. So far I can't say that I have plans to continue it. There are too many other uncompleted stories waiting for me. ;)

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kida_bridger January 16 2013, 15:43:07 UTC
Well written. I like how you portray the criminal element of Kaon. I would definately love to read more of this story.

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silberstreif January 17 2013, 03:39:20 UTC
Thanks for your comment! I would love to write more as well, but at the moment other stories take priority. Still, I love the feeling of this universe.

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pjlover666 January 16 2013, 19:07:11 UTC
*smirks* The readers say it! I would LOVE to read more of this as well! The characters, the universe - everything is amazing! What a wonderful start between Prowl and Jazz! <3

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silberstreif January 17 2013, 03:40:26 UTC
:D Thanks! I really love this universe, but at the moment I have so many other stories begging for completion... but I wouldn't bet against it. The feeling of the universe is just to great to simply forget it.

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fianna9 January 17 2013, 03:10:22 UTC
I really like the world development, especially the connection between Megatron and Orion Pax. The corruption and despair were powerfully but quietly shown to us throughout the story. Great job.

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silberstreif January 17 2013, 03:42:20 UTC
Thanks for your comment! I always liked the idea that Megatron and Orion Pax had a connection... and I always thought that together they could have been truly great.

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ledishae January 18 2013, 14:56:56 UTC
This has so much depth, layers of society and anguish. It's really good, and I must agree with the other comments, it would be great to see this continued. I hope you find the time to write more of this verse, especially this intriguing arrangement of the more powerful characters, and the angst of Prowl and Smokescreen.

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silberstreif January 18 2013, 21:10:08 UTC
Thank you. I love writing things that show the living situation.
The more I think about the more possibilities for a sequel come into my mind, but I'm so busy at the moment that I will not promise anything yet.

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