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Fic: Works of Art

Oct 03, 2009 01:11

Title: Works of Art
Author: Silawen
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Urahara Kisuke and Kurotsuchi Mayuri. Could be seen as Urahara/Kurotsuchi.
Words: 1803 Words.
Warnings: None.
Summary: As he catches sight of a white coat, billowing smoothly in the wind, and sand-coloured hair, he turns away and sighs. Life always has its fiends.

Author's Note: Written ( Read more... )

bleach, fanfiction

Comments 19

crimson_fade October 3 2009, 00:23:09 UTC

Oooh... this was good. I loved the imagery in the beginning, and the way you described Mayuri's feelings towards Kisuke...

Urahara is a tricky character to write, but you did it pretty well!

silawen October 3 2009, 08:50:33 UTC

*smiles* Thank you so much. ^^ I really appreciate your comment. *wibbles*

I really have to practice at writing Urahara, it seems, as I do like the Urahara/Mayuri pairing. (Mad scientists for the win!) He's tricky, though.

saiyanzrepublik October 3 2009, 09:39:53 UTC

oh wow. never thought of this pairing. very well written and I like how you portray their characteristics. :D I like the last line in the story, it just fits Urahara so well, the "sad tilt to his lips".

thanks so much for sharing! :D

silawen October 3 2009, 10:22:54 UTC

*grin* I just like crazy pairings, I suppose. (And honestly, there's enough crazy in these two to last a life-time.) I'm very pleased to hear you thought I portrayed them well, as I don't quite have as much experience writing Urahara as I do Mayuri. So that's really appreciated. :D

Thank you for commenting!

cruelest_month October 3 2009, 15:38:59 UTC

OMFG UNF that was fantastic! I think you did a great job with both of them.

Also it was a much better take on either one of them than I can manage... But I'll have to try because I definitely and endlessly crave fic about them. XD

silawen October 3 2009, 19:20:40 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. ^^ I worried you might not approve. *giggle*

Aw, bless. You're too sweet. Seriously, though, I'm sure you'd do a much better job and I'd love to read it. (And maybe I can help you with that craving again soon. ;)) Cheers, hun!

cruelest_month October 4 2009, 05:47:25 UTC

No, no. I approve! I love the weird way they are around one another.

Ugh, no. I will give it a try for you or someone else while I work on my other prompts, but ugh so scary. I'll write them so badly but yay craving helping. :D <3

freecell_it_is October 4 2009, 09:10:15 UTC

Oh god, I love this pairing! You'll never know how happy I was to stumble across this. XD And so beautifully written, too! <3

silawen October 4 2009, 11:10:35 UTC

Hee! In that case, I'm so very happy that I could supply it. I am ever so fond of Mayuri and this pairing in particular is just wickedly interesting. Two brilliant, though crazy, scientists with odd social norms. It's great.

Thank you so much!

rezhomina October 4 2009, 10:33:20 UTC

fffffttttt I've been dying to read something/anything with these two for artistic inspiration. Great descriptions and interaction. Great PAIRING >:D I know writing these two can be a total headache sometime *sigh*

Fabulous~

silawen October 4 2009, 11:13:15 UTC

Oh, wow, I'm so glad to hear that there are more people who enjoy this pairing. Before this post I figured there might be just a handful, but it turned out to be more than that. *happy* I always thought people hated Mayuri so much - which I don't get, but that's beside the point - that they wouldn't want to pair them up. It's always great to hear I'm wrong. ;)

Hopefully I could help you in the artistic inspiration department! If anything ever comes of said inspiration, then please let me know. I'd love to see it.

Thanks!

rezhomina October 5 2009, 07:19:12 UTC

When good Mayuri-related work does pop up, all us fans crawl out from our quiet hideouts and just eat it up it seems. I don't get most Mayuri pairings, but when he's written well, I forget about the lack of sanity in it.
-except for Urahara/Mayuri, which makes all the sense in the world >:D

I don't know if you've seen the Fade to Black movie, but it added the cherry on to your cake of inspirational UraMayu goodness. I'll definitely give you a heads up if I get some work out from this ♥

silawen October 5 2009, 13:40:56 UTC

You flatterer, you. *grin* I can understand it, though. Mayuri doesn't get half the attention he deserves. I don't get that, because writing him is so much fun. Intelligent, creative, frightening, crazy, border-line evil/most definitely evil...what's not to like, especially from a creative stand-point?

I have! Let me just insert a spoiler barrier before gushing. *grin*

FADE TO BLACK SPOILERS HERE!!I hadn't actually seen it before I wrote this - I watched the movie last night - but I got all giddy because of it. Apart from feeling so bad for Mayuri for feeling so frightened of being locked up again, it gave us such an insight in him and the dynamic those two have. He truly fears being locked up and restrained, which I suppose is the scientist in him. He needs to be creative and that can't be tied down. (Which would also explain his current madness ( ... )

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