Fic: River Of Tears

Sep 15, 2009 00:36

Title: River Of Tears.
Author: Silawen
Rating: PG-13 for character death and mentions of blood/battle/war.
Characters: Kira Izuru, Ichimaru Gin, mentions of Kira Izuru/Ichimaru Gin.
Warning: Character death. *sadface*
Summary:
He remembers that smile. Oh, he remembers it all too well…

Author's Note: Written for the 'River' prompt on my new ( Read more... )

bleach, fanfiction

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kwansan September 15 2009, 04:42:43 UTC
Oh, Gin... I do like his character, but I'm not quite sure what to make of him at times like these. So deceptively wicked on the surface, but who knows what really lies underneath.

I loved the entire setting and tone for this story. A very somber tone to contrast with all the fluff that I've been reading lately (not to say that fluff is a bad thing XD)

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silawen September 15 2009, 14:06:56 UTC

Hee. I'm not as big a fan of Gin as most people are - possibly because I like Mayuri, whose crazy outranks Gin by just a bit - but he's a very fascinating character to work with. I haven't written from his point of view yet, but I'm sure it'd be all sorts of fun. :D

Thank you. ^^ I just had this image in mind of a lone tree next to a river. A bit like Kira, I suppose. I just didn't want to make Kira too emo. I'm afraid that didn't work out, though. *grin*

Thanks for the lovely comment!

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mako_pretty September 15 2009, 14:17:19 UTC
Aww, the end of that was heartbreaking. Beautifully written.

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silawen September 15 2009, 14:27:44 UTC

*smiles* Thank you. I'm so very glad you like it.

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just_heidi September 16 2009, 00:15:05 UTC
Very, very beautiful.

I don't think this Kira was EMO. He had the just right balance of sad and melancholic. Great image of Gin dead by his own sword.

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silawen September 16 2009, 10:39:53 UTC

Thank you so much. :)

Heh, I'm glad you think so. I really worried about it, because I didn't want to put off readers with his behaviour. Thanks again!

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sakura_nii_chan September 16 2009, 01:21:01 UTC
only Gin would die with a smile on his face. poor izuru though this was beautifully written

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silawen September 16 2009, 10:40:52 UTC

Aye. (Or, well, maybe Kenpachi.) Gin's creepy like that. *grin*

Thanks!

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0senbon_zakura0 March 1 2010, 17:40:25 UTC
That was lovely, I loved every part of it.

Thank you for makeing such a lovely story <<<<<<<<<<<<<3

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silawen March 1 2010, 17:44:15 UTC

*grin* Aw, thanks! I'm glad you liked it so much.

(And yay, Eiki!)

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0senbon_zakura0 March 1 2010, 17:50:47 UTC
You're welcome <<3

(I want more Icons T-T... I want Tuti icons)

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silawen March 1 2010, 19:47:33 UTC

^^

(Oh? Allow me to pimp my burimyu icons. *sheepish* plenty of Tuti there as well!)

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