Careening Toward Being Alone (Alisha, Misfits)

Dec 05, 2010 01:22

Title: Careening Toward Being Alone

Series: Misfits

Characters: Alisha, Simon

Pairings: Alisha/Simon

Rating: R for possible repetition of the f-word

Notes: Just little snatches of Alisha’s future. (Title from "Oats We Sow" by Gregory and the Hawk) (Barely reread it before posting, so... Typos possibly abound.)

Words: 473

Alisha hates Thursdays. )

fic, character: alisha, fandom: misfits, pairing: alisha/simon

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berry_hearts December 5 2010, 09:18:54 UTC
Amazing.
(also, Kudos for using Thursday! Fourth wall! WOOT)

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sifting_truths December 5 2010, 09:24:29 UTC
Thank you. :]

(And, hah, thank you. Kudos for noticing.)

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arysani December 6 2010, 05:34:13 UTC
I love that some of it is so mundane - just another day of the week, but such amazing and horrifying things are happening. Seems grounding to string them all together like that. Lovely work.

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ladygawain December 6 2010, 11:41:29 UTC
Oh, my heart - this was beautiful. I loved the structuring around Thursdays, like arysani pointed out, so mundane, but all of these things are happening. Really beautiful imagery and tear-making. Thanks so much for sharing this with us!

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femmenoire December 6 2010, 16:13:41 UTC
This is so beautiful, and sad, ad tragic! Thanks for sharing.

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genaschuyler December 6 2010, 19:20:17 UTC
Oh, I think you just broke my heart. In the good way (if there can be a good way).

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