Life Changes - Part 1 of 2

Mar 30, 2008 17:33


This is something I started for LoveFest but didn't finish. Someone had requested a foot festish story and this is my very lame attempt at that. It's unbeta'd. The BB is probably chillin' at the beach.....  not worried about all my typos and what not. Anyway, this is all there is to this. If you read a line and think, Wow, that sounds sorta like ( Read more... )

au!au, oneshot

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Life Changes ennis4me March 31 2008, 01:25:37 UTC
I liked this very much!! Don't know why you berated yourself that it wasn't that good - very nicely done!

I liked the older Jack and young Ennis here - nice combination AU.

You know, it would be great to see another part, especially since Ennis told Jack that "next time", they leave the toe sucking until after they make love.

Thanks so much!! Adrianne

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Re: Life Changes sienata March 31 2008, 03:02:57 UTC
I'm glad that you enjoyed this. it was truly just a story i concocted for the foot thing. I have a think for heath's feet, and someone req. a ff story, so there you go. I like this pic of him and it got the ball rolling. I don't see myself writing any more of this, since i have so many other wip's, but i did want to at least finish and post what i had started, since it was something a bit different. i'm glad you liked it. thanks for the comment. if i have a spare minute, i might write another chapter or two, you never know with me. =)

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samtyr March 31 2008, 03:52:28 UTC
Mmmmmm... sexy feet! ;) Off to read more...

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lolitaray March 31 2008, 09:27:55 UTC
I totally loved this and yah to their being a part two! Your description of Ennis's feet, well. Damn. Fucking so hot and Jack really does need to get laid except not with a woman...hee hee!

*smooches*

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krokomaus April 2 2008, 13:05:06 UTC
*grin* I like this story. Makes me smiling all the time. Thanks.

Dagi

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