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sienata

Goin' Fishin' - Reload, Refire

Jul 19, 2007 00:16

Author's Note: More Sex in the Tent. It's still not dark, and it's still not raining. Darn! I'll try again another day. Back to AKL for now. S!

He’d said, “Blow me,” just for fun, to make a joke and break the tension, get them past the first awkward moment of dealing with each other after they just had sex completely out of the fucking clear blue ( Read more... )

goin' fishin', au!au, sienata

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lizbird July 19 2007, 06:37:41 UTC

It's so nice to get this story right before bed. Nothing like starting right off with the sex... yea... lets just get right to it;)...I'm so glad you're thinking of making this into another story.... right?

sienata July 19 2007, 14:52:27 UTC

Yes, something different - sex first!! We'll see how it goes. I can't committ to another story right now, but I'll tinker with this in my down time. Glad you are enjoying it. S!

lizbird July 19 2007, 19:13:14 UTC

no prob. it was fun either way.

rosiet July 19 2007, 07:08:44 UTC

How come no matter how short your pieces I love the Jack and Ennis' you create? I don't know. But here come another two!!!
This was SMOKIN'........Thud. DED.

sienata July 19 2007, 14:54:03 UTC

Glad you like them. I love them too, but them I love them all. I think I need a 12 Step Program for J/E Addiction! S!

120cassie July 19 2007, 07:19:18 UTC

Hi

God do your talents never end? You've created yet another ficlet(?) that we can love!

You've written this showing they are best friends and their honesty & trust with each other shines through.

I'm dumbfounded about Lureen.Is she mad?

Julie

sienata July 19 2007, 14:56:18 UTC

Lureen's not the sharpest knife in the drawer, but that works to our advantage, I guess. Although I can't see her just letting Jack go completely, and of course, Jack's POV might not match up exactly with hers....... S!

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sienata July 19 2007, 13:33:51 UTC

Yeah. More likely he'd be having to beat me off with a stick. Back girl, back girl! Give it a rest already!!! LOL.

Yes, this is something totally different for me. There will be issues, but no tricks and no secrets. We'll see how it goes. S!

big_heart_june July 19 2007, 07:36:21 UTC

This was gorgeous, Jane! It was hot, sweet and a lot of fun! I LOVE Noisy!Jack and I loved how desperate he was for Ennis to finish him off! I LOL when Ennis needed a water break and Jack nearly choked him!
Your last lines were beautiful and I love that image you gave us.
Thank YOU! XXXXXXXXXXXXXX

sienata July 19 2007, 14:58:20 UTC

I love Noisy!Jack too! He's fun to wind up. Glad you enjoyed this. Back to Serious Business now tho. AKL awaits. S!