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Fakeout Makeout Commentfic Fest!

Mar 07, 2008 05:07

So, hey, it's not a three-day weekend but it should be, and people are sick and the weather is crappy and it is a perfect time for commentfic.

Fakeout makeout commentfic, that is--for all of those times that two characters have to kiss as a distraction, or a kind of disguise. "No, no, we're not in your Sacred Cove to consider stealing the ( Read more... )

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"Prior Claim" - Ronon/Keller tielan March 8 2008, 22:13:28 UTC

"But you are not partnered?"

Jennifer smiled nervously at the man whose bare arm she was just preparing for an innoculation shot. "For the dinner tonight?" She asked cautiously, trying to remember if Teyla had said anything about the romantic customs on this planet.

"Yes. I was thinking that if not, perhaps you will partner me for dinner tonight?"

It was, she reflected, not the kind of dinner invitation she was used to getting - dinner with a couple of hundred Acrevo who were extremely grateful for the vaccine she and Atlantis had provided.

Actually, she wasn't used to getting dinner invitations at all.

"Uh..." Jennifer tried to think of a tactful way to get out of it. This wasn't her forte, avoiding unwanted interest. She'd never really had interest before, let alone unwanted interest ( ... )

Re: "Prior Claim" - Ronon/Keller pentapus March 8 2008, 23:20:06 UTC

Loved the kiss and the dialogue after. I could easily hear (and see) both of them doing just that!

Re: "Prior Claim" - Ronon/Keller chaya March 8 2008, 23:55:51 UTC

a man's knowing grin with a boy's laughing edge

Oh, that is so him. You've nailed it. ♥

Re: "Prior Claim" - Ronon/Keller siegeofangels March 9 2008, 00:17:16 UTC

Awww, I love this! Ronon is only too happy to help.

Re: "Prior Claim" - Ronon/Keller renisanz March 9 2008, 14:10:17 UTC

OMG, I loved this.

. . . a man's knowing grin with a boy's laughing edge.

And I agree, this line is so Ronon. :)

Re: "Prior Claim" - Ronon/Keller anatsuno March 9 2008, 18:52:18 UTC

Aww, that's adorable.

Re: "Prior Claim" - Ronon/Keller retrofit88 March 9 2008, 20:50:45 UTC

cool! I like the grins, especially. Mmm smiley boys.

Re: "Prior Claim" - Ronon/Keller mercy4vr March 10 2008, 04:55:56 UTC

Oh, yay! That was lovely! ♥

Re: "Prior Claim" - Ronon/Keller restless_faery March 10 2008, 05:14:54 UTC

Definitely worth reading. You captured both characters perfectly. Left me wanting more.

Re: "Prior Claim" - Ronon/Keller mahdi_far_gai March 10 2008, 06:18:35 UTC

Haha, I loved it!

Re: "Prior Claim" - Ronon/Keller little_profiler March 10 2008, 14:42:01 UTC

That was so great! I loved how Ronon didn't even hesitate to 'play' her boyfriend. Great job!

Re: "Prior Claim" - Ronon/Keller elynross March 10 2008, 15:44:33 UTC

ADORABLE. What a great Ronon, clever and subtle, with that perfect combination of maturity and boyishness.

Re: "Prior Claim" - Ronon/Keller ileliberte March 11 2008, 00:28:08 UTC

Oh awesome! I love this pairing, and the ending dialog is excellent :D

Re: "Prior Claim" - Ronon/Keller blacksquirrel July 28 2008, 03:16:55 UTC

Cute!

elliesmeow February 20 2012, 05:48:29 UTC

Dayum..fans self. How come I can't get an offer like that from my very own alien barbarian?LOL Lucky doc.

Thanks for posting. You nailed their voices.:)

-Ellie

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