Just love me - Part 6/11

[sid_vicious_03]

Title -  Just love me - Part 6/11
Author - sid_vicious_03 
Rating -  NC17
Pairings - Eames/Arthur, Arthur/OC
Word count - 4186
Warnings - Cursing, sex, extreme abuse, violation of human rights, unbetad, etc
Disclaimers - I don’t own Inception or any of the characters, sadly, but i do own the story.
Notes -  Are at the

Comments

[leo093]

FLUFFFFFFFFFF TTnTT
This story makes me so sad! but I need more. I think I've gone through catharsis reading this. Honestly.
Now I just need Arthur to leave that bastard right now and go live happily with Eames.

Can't wait for the next part :).

[sid_vicious_03]

What Arthur will do remains hidden in the future chapters. I wont spoil a thing because then the fun would disappear :3 Even if Arthur should leave Tobin, I just can't help but loving the man...

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[twisted_ream]

I may have grown too fond of the story when I kind of started not to like it (from part 5) I feel like it's going way fast and off-tracks and Arthur not feeling what he's supposed to feel considering who he spends times with
(This can all be due to my mind creating the story to its end already)
and at the part before there was some plenty of spelling and grammar errors that I clenched my teeth at (normally a few is not a problem for me but when it comes down to so many in one sentence) not that it took away from the reading pleasure but time to time I got stuck to them

god this comes out as harsh but this is my gift to you as a viewer :D I hope you don't feel offend

This is a great storyline if the time were stretched a little more

[sid_vicious_03]

Ah no worries. All comments are good comments, no matter what the content is because there is always a trace of truth in it, unless the comment ended up on the wrong fic of course so I don't mind :)

I do have to admit that my grammar isn't as good as it could be and as most of the creative moments for writing come in the middle of the night it's not getting any easier. Also I don't have the patience and right mindset to re-read and find mistakes as I just pass them by (blame a fandom with worse grammar). Also I do not have a beta-reader which might be something I should consider at the end of the day xD

At least the story line is still good for you so there is a positive part to it at least :) I do admit that for a little while as I wrote it, I didn't have much idea where to go with the fic (and how to go there either). Now I hope I didn't come of as to bitchy as well. But I appreciate your comment anyway and will pay more attention to what you pointed out :)

[twisted_ream]

beta-reader came to my head as advice too! but I'd never have the patience either.
But the Part 7 is def an improvement, kind of like back on track :---D, there was this foggier area in between ;)
but I do think it's rare to have strong consistensy in long and demanding fics.

Would you be willing to enter my challenge of fic-creation?(more info in future post)

[sid_vicious_03]

Great that it got back on track then, if it would have continued I'd get a bit worried actually xD. And words can't describe how much I agree with you.

And that that seems fun, if I can be tempted into it (which I'm far to easily done). So if I get some info on it I'll definitely consider it :)

[purple_spock]

This on is so sad and heartbreaking. I really want Eames to kick Tobin's ass. Another great job, and I'm looking forward to reading the next part.

[sid_vicious_03]

Happy to hear that you like it :) And the other part is already up so enjoy :3