I don't even really like this pairing but I loved this. It's hard to get everything into a oneshot, let alone something that had as much build as that. Sexy and funny, I really enjoyed that.
This is very good, really nice piece of writing (and I like the AoixUruha bit at the end)
I remember this. I read it so many time! this is awesome oneshot but i do remember another story u started but didnt finish it, it related to this oneshot. I would gladly to read it again!
Glad that you liked it enough to re-read it then :) I decided to repost it so see what kind of credit it would get to see if I'd get back into writing Jrock as well.
Ah the other story however is not of mine creation. I got asked if a person was allowed to write her own continuation to it. And I agreed to it as long as it was credited to the original story. So that one is not of mine creation at all.
I'll be honest, I was scrolling through my f-list, saw this on the list, and immediately opened it up in the next tab to read because this pairing is so rare to me. I support it ^_^. Unfortunately, there's not much written about that comes across plausible, yet even though this was AU, it was really very easy to visualize. (psh, that had nothing to do with me being a sucker for copfic, what are you talking about?)
it's been mentioned a few times before, but I'll say it again for the sake of letting you know, I admire the amount of build up you managed to get in before the climactic part of the plot. Taking it slow and having the right level of suspense is really difficult.
And then I have to congratulate you just for writing Kyo... he is just such an... evasive character to write. his real personality is so elusive. he has all these character traits that come form his ideas, his opinions, his lyrics, his visualizations, his style... and it can be very hard to capture a character like him. So I think you've done a nice job of
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I don't mind the italics so don't apologize, sometimes weird stuff happen on the net. I've got to give it to you though, that probably was the longest comment I've ever received and made me as giddy as a little kid. It made my day so thank you for it :) as a matter of fact, I'm thinking of saving it for my days when I don't believe in my writing
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Actually the repost was a test to see if it still came to people's liking, and if I got enough positive reaction to it I'd pick up writing for the Jrock Fandom again which I put down but yet miss every day. So maybe I will write more in the future :)
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This is very good, really nice piece of writing (and I like the AoixUruha bit at the end)
Good job!
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i liked it! good job :)b
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Ah the other story however is not of mine creation. I got asked if a person was allowed to write her own continuation to it. And I agreed to it as long as it was credited to the original story. So that one is not of mine creation at all.
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it's been mentioned a few times before, but I'll say it again for the sake of letting you know, I admire the amount of build up you managed to get in before the climactic part of the plot. Taking it slow and having the right level of suspense is really difficult.
And then I have to congratulate you just for writing Kyo... he is just such an... evasive character to write. his real personality is so elusive. he has all these character traits that come form his ideas, his opinions, his lyrics, his visualizations, his style... and it can be very hard to capture a character like him. So I think you've done a nice job of ( ... )
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I really enjoyed their dialogue when it all went down and after it.
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