The mods feel that though your app is strong, some adjustments need to be made. Please address following points require for clarification for this application: ● The third person sample needs some tweaking! We feel that it wavers too much between tenses and could use some grammar adjustments.
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The mods feel that though your app is strong, some adjustments need to be made. Please address following points require for clarification for this application:
● The third person sample needs some tweaking! We feel that it wavers too much between tenses and could use some grammar adjustments.
Please reply as a comment to this comment so that the mods can see the changes made to your app. Thank you!
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