Gone

Sep 21, 2007 12:36

Title: Gone

Rating: R for emo

Pairings: House/Wilson friendship, relationship if you read between the lines

Length: 1022

Warning: Major Character death, and depressingness. I cried writing it.

Summary: Sometimes good-bye is the hardest thing to say.

A/N: First death fic. x-posted at deathfic_md. And obviously, I don't own them.

Gone )

accident, death, coma

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bmax67 September 21 2007, 18:52:59 UTC
So depressing but written so well.

I felt Wilson's pain as he watched his friend leave him for good. His emotions and thoughts wreaking havoc on himself, especially about wishing House would just die.

It's so hard to picture House unmoving, unresponsive. So unlike him.

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empty_splendor September 21 2007, 20:41:23 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

When i finished and read it, I sat back and was like "I'm one morose mofo..."

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cosmic_quest September 21 2007, 21:36:49 UTC
Very depressing but I loved it. It dealt nicely with the alternating thoughts that someone must feel when a loved one is in a coma, on one hand wanting them to live but on the other knowing they will have brain damage and won't be the same person. I liked how Wilson felt it was unnatural for House to not only be so still but to die so quietly.

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empty_splendor September 22 2007, 01:30:27 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I felt that the hardest part for him would be both struggling with the alternating thoughts and the discomfort in seeing House like that. I'm glad it came across effectively.

And what a cute puppy!

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porcelainmistre November 15 2007, 02:09:11 UTC
Wow. this was amazing. very sad...

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