Wait and Watch

[madwriter223]

Title: Wait and Watch
Author: madwriter223
Summary: Can't really say much without spoiling. DeathFic.
Rating: R
Pairing(s): slight House/Wilson (if you squint)
Feedback: I don't write deathfics much, so some critique would be appreciated.
Author's Note: Yup. Another post-finale one from me.

Wait and Watch

The bottle was sitting in front of

Comments

[taricalmcacil]

That made me cry. Excellent job!

[madwriter223]

Thank you for the kind words. ^__^
Glad you liked it.

[angelcat2865]

Wow, very good I hope there is more.

One little thing the line "like he was. His only friend." read a little awkward might read better if you phrased it "like it was his only friend"

[madwriter223]

I recognised the awkwardness in that. And thank you for the proposition, but I think I'll leave it like that. I know it's awkward, but I kinda was aiming for that. Sorry.

[hibernia1]

Ow sad! Liked House & Steve & Hector & Amber watching Wilson together. You know what brought tears to my eyes, the way Steve died (I'm terrible with animals that die).

[madwriter223]

I'm sorry about that. But I hated the thought of House having to sit all alone with just Amber. ^_^'

[madwriter223]

Sorry about that. I actually wrote this because I got tired of all those 'House tries to kill himself but Wilson saves him in the last second'.

[pffff5]

I don't usually read death!fics, especially when they deal with House's death. But after W'H, I could read anything which have Wilson pay for his unfairness and lack of gratitude. His sorrow at the end of your story rights the wrongs.
Thanks, very nicely done.

[madwriter223]

Thank you for reading this.
I'm sorry about the death fic, but with so many 'almost-died-but-Wilson-saves-at-the-last-second ones out there, I felt something different was needed.