Comments | shyaway: PotC fic: R&R (Jack/Anamaria, PG-13, 1/1)

shyaway

PotC fic: R&R (Jack/Anamaria, PG-13, 1/1)

Jun 23, 2006 22:48

Title: R&R
Author: shyaway
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Jack/Anamaria
Disclaimer: Pirates of the Caribbean and its characters are owned by Disney.
Summary: Jack, Anamaria, and a bottle of rum on a quiet afternoon aboard the Pearl.

( R&R )

fic: potc - pairing (jack/anamaria), potc_dogwatch, potc fanfiction, potc

Comments 15

geekmama June 24 2006, 05:11:13 UTC

What a beautiful interlude, and all the sweeter for being a seemingly familiar one. Really wonderful!

shyaway June 27 2006, 21:55:02 UTC

Thank you! I was thrilled by your comment at BPS - wasn't confident that I could write sensually at all, so thanks so much for that! :-D

pinkdormouse June 24 2006, 12:49:32 UTC

Cute!

shyaway June 27 2006, 21:55:31 UTC

Thanks!

hereswith July 1 2006, 18:45:08 UTC

Slowly catching up! You haven't written J/A before, have you, or have I missed it? Anyway, you do it beautifully, and oh, yes, it's ever so sensual :-) You really manage to convey that feeling of a lazy, sunny day, and the descriptions are great. My favourite is this, I think: He's glittering like the sunlight on the undulating waves that are making the ship bob gently; golden smile, silver ring, black diamond eyes that snap and sparkle. Her shine is quieter, steadier, like the glow of the Pearl herself.

shyaway July 2 2006, 10:27:31 UTC

I've never finished or posted any J/A before, no... It makes me so happy that you think the sensuality worked too! :-) Thank you very much.