'post no bills'

Jan 19, 2013 20:48

Title: 'post no bills'
Pairing: Akame
Rating: R
Genre: romance, angst, guro
Disclaimer: I own nothing and nobody regarding the boys >:
Summary: Just another day, another trip to the hospital.
Warning: Guro (trypophobia), bodily secretions.
A/N: This was originaly for a h/c square, but that was forever ago. If you don't know what trypophobia is, Read more... )

p: akame, r: r, l: oneshot

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turtleish January 19 2013, 22:19:23 UTC
I am going to be honest. I found this disgusting.
Yet I liked it and can't stop re-reading it. You are incredible for writing this.

(I really liked when you mentioned Jin's tongue being capable of miracles. Licking those clusters... It was weirdly good in a freaky way)

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shuu_cream January 19 2013, 22:59:18 UTC
Thank you so much ♥ It is a disgusting subject, but if you were compelled to keep reading then I feel I got it about right.

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isolated_killer January 19 2013, 23:16:19 UTC
Your style here is very nice and smooth; it is gripping and I love how perfectly well the soothing parts with Jin and his care mixed with the quite shocking mentions of Kame's... disease. One moment and I tear up at Kame almost begging Jin to leave him, another - I'm shuddering at the mental image of Jin's lips against raw and open holes near Kame's mouth.

This fic is not about the peculiar disease though, it is about the relationship, the love, the care someone is ready to provide others with in spite of them having a disability; be it a physical (and horrible) or a mental one. Even though this particular disease might be quite repulsive, one can't help but overlook it if he truly loves someone.

I think you've done a very good job on this fic, the description of this phobia; it is both quite a shocking and yet touching fic. I can only say that this stale fandom should be happy to have something of this new (using the word fresh seems just wrong in this case though) kind.

Thank you for writing this ♥

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shuu_cream January 20 2013, 01:10:15 UTC
♥♥♥
Thank you~ I hoped to make this a mix of horrible and romantic - Jin loving Kame despite these constant things happening that would scare most people away.

And yes asjsndk that's exactly it. Although it's a very loud, obvious subject, the point is how they get through it and the ways they (Jin especially) have adapted around it and carry out a relationship around it that's only strengthened by what happens.

;_; Thank you so much. That really means a lot to me ♥ and thanks for reading when you don't like the subject much~

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cagnurit January 20 2013, 12:08:02 UTC
When I looked at the illustrating pictures, they seems so horrifying. And so is Kame's disease you described in the fic ;____;

But, above all, there is the love, the care, the appreciation. And it is beautiful, really beautiful. The way you write is like a song, a poem.

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shuu_cream January 20 2013, 15:55:13 UTC
Thank you so much ♥ Although the curse is the theme of the plot, the love and care between them is what I really wanted to show.

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chibitanz January 20 2013, 16:19:52 UTC
I tried not to think of the images u linked as i read your story. It was gross but in a way i could stand it because i understand what it feels like having holes, maybe not to the exact of what Kame was going through, but holes.

it was scary and disgusting and there isnt anything i want more than ending my life. its very very intimidating that its actually indescribable.

For Jin to be able to stand Kame through all along, its not real. but i love to believe. You created a real angel and its almost what authors do. its amazing. I love fictional universe and this is one of the reasons.

thank you for this heart wrenching work.

it feels.
thanks cutie

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shuu_cream January 20 2013, 18:40:41 UTC
Thank you ♥

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starg8fan_liz January 20 2013, 17:20:40 UTC
ok, so I never should have looked at the first pic 0_0 that is like my number one thing i'm truly disturbed/disgusted by/ that freaks me out (and there aren't to many things that do)! LOL but I really loved this fic, in all it's gory nature ^_^ wonderful writing, so sad though; poor Kame ;_____;

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shuu_cream January 20 2013, 18:48:10 UTC
Oops ^^; Yeah, it's not very nice.. I'm actually not too bad with it (thankfully, or I probably couldn't have written xD). Thank you so much ^^ ♥ I've already been poked by a friend to write a sequel and make Kame better, so hopefully he can be happy again soon.

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