Comments | shutupeccles: Dark, nasty fanfic (2/2)

shutupeccles

Dark, nasty fanfic (2/2)

Sep 09, 2010 01:33

Title: stop me
pairing: Arthur/Merlin
word count approx 7760
Rating: 17+
Disclaimer: Characters adapted from BBC reproductions of characters from Arthurian legend.
Warning: passive resistance, violence, non-con bondage, rape (not graphic). The majority of fluffy bunnies were rounded up, shot and made into ( Read more... )

arthur/merlin, rating 17+, angst, violence, break-up, naughty bits, slash, drama

Comments 26

hermitknut September 8 2010, 17:03:24 UTC

*cuddles fic* Ohhh, poor Merlin - poor Arthur! This is a really good fic, great work!
HK

shutupeccles September 9 2010, 06:24:59 UTC

thanks.
[shoots another bunny]

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shutupeccles September 9 2010, 06:27:21 UTC

wow, what a reaction.
[ducks and covers in case of flying objects]
Go forth and inflict your murderous tendencies upon the world! Thanks for the compliment =D

merlinmonster September 8 2010, 20:35:42 UTC

OMG this is amazing. That last line is devestating but this fic suits not having a happy ending and I think it gains something for that. Absolutely wonderful although I'm going to have to go and read some fluff now lol. XD

shutupeccles September 9 2010, 06:28:34 UTC

Thanks for loving my nasty.
Enjoy your fluff.

loveme_likethat September 8 2010, 23:12:57 UTC

I'm a sucker for forgiveness fics, where one party is truly reprehensible yet the other not only forgives them but is willing to try again. What I don't find consistent is that after everything he did, Arthur would be unable to cross that line again. He may have felt terribly guilty - as well he should - but given your characterisation of him it seems unlikely that he would be able to resist a forgiving Merlin for ever.

Just my thoughts :)

shutupeccles September 9 2010, 06:24:05 UTC

Thanks for your honesty - I truly appreciate it and I see where you're coming from.
The way I saw it he was also weighing his sins against Merlin's - there's a lot of disproportion between them - and Merlin's forgiveness only served to make him more disgusted with his own actions. Memories of the last time he had 'contact' with Merlin certainly would not be pleasant ones.
Plus, I don't find Merlin as hard to resist as some so my prejudices may be showing =D

malevolent73 September 9 2010, 01:54:14 UTC

The bunny massacre made me read this and I wasn't disappointed. Agonising, heartbreaking and awful. Loved it. :)

shutupeccles September 9 2010, 06:31:04 UTC

Thanks for the compliment. Sometimes 'nice' deserves to DIE