There's an Alien....

[shullbitter]

Picture book (UGH I HATE PICTURE BOOKS) writing assignment for class today. I know I need at least one  more stanza somewhere in there (no clue where) yay, Kate helped me put another stanza in! , and if anyone spots wonky rhythm, please do point it out.

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amazing

[x_paleo_rogue_x]

This is one of the best poems I've ever read and anyone who thinks your work is disgusting and that you can't write is stupid and wouldn't know good writing if it hit them in the face.

ALSO, *ahem*, people who don't like "kids' stuff" shouldn't read a poem like this (you should know who you are). You must be a nasty person to say something so rude to my friend.

Anyway, this is fantastic, AMD. :D Keep it up.

Roxy

Re: amazing

[shullbitter]

Thanks, Roxy. You're too sweet! <3