"Sometimes I'm not sure if you're being serious or not."
Poor Seany. I know how he feels. Your are on a mission to make me love him aren't you?!? Evil I tell you. Evil. ;) Keep up the great work my dear. Can't wait for the next chapter!
You have a knack for reminding me how much I love Viggo. :) This is great, especially the last one. [giggle]
Viggo knew how to take the piss, just like anyone else, and the words he'd written and scratched out were good for a laugh. But some little part of Sean's brain thought that maybe Viggo wasn't completely going for the joke on that one.
Very eloquent, Sean. You know, someone who's just trying to take the piss out of a mate on the cross-outs wouldn't have used that second "G" word. [raised eyebrow]
a constant feeling of having somehow accidentally signed up to do a big-budget porn film.
LOL! You definitely had me cracking up on this. :D Hey, if even 1% of the fanfic stories were true, they never would've had time to film anything but sex! ;)
Instead he put a hand around the back of Sean's head, fingers scratching through the hair there for a few moments, before he pulled Sean forward and planted a kiss softly on his forehead.
Awwwwww. [misty smile]
I can't help it, really. I'm just a sucker for mush. :)
Normally he would have been embarrassed by such a display, but somehow with Viggo it seemed okay.
And that means...? [raised eyebrow] Come on, Sean, we're way beyond hotness now! [glares and waves her rock painted with YOU THINK VIGGO'S HOT.] Damn, I'm going to have to repaint my rock. [heavy sigh]
"Do you want to change first, clean up a little?"
Wanna get naked in my trailer? Um, er, I mean... shower! Right, want to rinse the dust off? [bright, helpful smile]
a ribbed t-shirt that would be tight enough to make the wrinkles disappear when he put it on.
Of course that's his only reason for wanting to wear a T-shirt that tight. Uh-huh. Makes perfect sense. :) I think his subconscious is still working overtime to make
( ... )
"You're not gonna stretch those out on me, are you? They're my favorite pair."
[busts a gut snickering!]
Sean tried to look offended. "Are you implying that I'm fat?"
NO, Sean, that is NOT what he's implying. [poke]
Sean felt his cock twitch and he took a step back. Fuck. Guess he noticed after all. "Sometimes..." he started, then faltered, staring back at Viggo.
"Yeah?" Viggo moved closer again.
"Sometimes I'm not sure if you're being serious or not."
[sigh] He comes so close, so close, so often.... [scream!]
And Sean didn't know why he said it, or why his heart was suddenly beating so hard.
Tell Sean I can write him an essay if he wants. I even promise not to use any words with more than two syllables. :/
Sean suddenly realized with the utmost clarity that it'd been foolish of him to try to out-flirt Viggo. He was way out of his depth on this one, and it was doing strange things to his mind and body that he hadn't quite figured out yet.Yes, Sean. We know. [rolling eyes] Forget the
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Tell Sean I can write him an essay if he wants. I even promise not to use any words with more than two syllables. :/
heee...I think Viggo's already written one... :P
I need a club. A big one. With railroad spikes stuck through the business end. [glower]
LOL and EEK! *puts metal helmet on Sean* He'll get there, give the boy a chance! :P
[grin] OK, tell Viggo!muse that if he can't make some headway tonight, with this setup he's so expertly concocted, I'm going to wash my hands of him. :D
Give the guy a break....look what he has to work with!! *G*
Angie, who's discovered that her new purpose in life is to make Shriney laugh ;)
And you succeed admirably, m'dear! *hugs* *giggle* Thanks for all the fb!!
ROFL ohmygod! Just hysterical! I want you to know that I'm such a fan of this story that when I saw there was a new part out, I did a little dance of joy in my living room with my dog. Which would have been fine except that the hubby walked into the room just as we were. heh. um so. Anyway, I love this story. I can't wait til the next part!
Does *dance of joy* with you....hee...my hubby's gotten used to my strange outbursts, poor man. :P
I'm so glad you're enjoying this series...it's fun to write, even if this chapter gave me such a hard time!
I stopped writing just before the very end of the fic, and went and started dinner, so I could brew (hee!) over what would be a good ending...it suddenly occurred to me that I couldn't end it with schmoop...hee... Glad you found it funny! :P
Another wonderful chapter, Shriney! Loved it!! I was LMAO at Sean getting all hot and bothered by wearing Viggo's underwear and even more hot and bothered by thinking about Viggo wearing them... *giggles* God, I just love him. :D Viggo's line at the end is priceless. :)
And, oh god, now they're off to get drunk and Sean's already horny as all hell...
And poor Sean hasn't even gotten to the part where he remembers Viggo isn't wearing *any* underwear at the moment...hee...
I actually wrote most of the rest of the next chapter before this one--because this was just supposed to be a short lead-in to it...hahahahaha...you'd think I'd have learned by now that I can't write anything short!
So hopefully I'll be able to finish the next one soon, but you all know better than to believe me on that score. *G*
Repeat after me: Do not drink while reading anything Shriney has written. I should write this on a post-it and stick it on my screen. Of course apart from the mess on my screen, I pulled several muscles I didn't even know existed. *gr*
Man, I love your clueless!Sean. As angiepen said: I need a club!! A kingdom for a club. *gr* And crafty-and-otherworldly!Viggo is prizeless as well:
"My pen ran out," Viggo said, as if that explained everything. And it does explain everything because it is so Viggo-ish, isn't it?
As others have pointed out before: The last line is a killer-line. And you are the evil queen of cliffhangers. *gr*
Gosh, I dearly hope you are already working on the next chapter. The tension is killing me here. And with the sexual tension between the boys you could light a whole town. Even if Sean is still in denial about it all. *pets Sean*
heee!! So glad you've gotten a good laugh. *hands you screen wipe to clean up spray* I always try to get at least one good zinger in there, but it's fun to see how different lines get to different people.
Glad you like my Viggo-esque moments, and yes, poor Sean needs a good whack but I think understanding is starting to penetrate...we'll have to see... :P
The scary thing is that I wrote the next chapter before this one, because this part was just supposed to be a little lead-in to it...ooops. :P So now I have to tweak the next one to reflect what happened here...those damn muses, running away with the plot! :P
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lmao...I love love love this story! Ah.
"Sometimes I'm not sure if you're being serious or not."
Poor Seany. I know how he feels. Your are on a mission to make me love him aren't you?!? Evil I tell you. Evil. ;) Keep up the great work my dear. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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So glad you're enjoying...I'm working on the next part!
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I just had to get that out of my system. [cough]
Sexy Sensible
Edible Eloquent
Adorable Artistic
Naked Naked
You have a knack for reminding me how much I love Viggo. :) This is great, especially the last one. [giggle]
Viggo knew how to take the piss, just like anyone else, and the words he'd written and scratched out were good for a laugh. But some little part of Sean's brain thought that maybe Viggo wasn't completely going for the joke on that one.
Yes? So...? [encouraging smile]
Virile Vibrant
Irresistible Inspiring
Gorgeous Generous
Gentle Genius
Orgasmic Orgiastic
Very eloquent, Sean. You know, someone who's just trying to take the piss out of a mate on the cross-outs wouldn't have used that second "G" word. [raised eyebrow]
a constant feeling of having somehow accidentally signed up to do a big-budget porn film.
LOL! You definitely had me cracking up on this. :D Hey, if even 1% of the fanfic stories were true, they never would've had time to film anything but sex! ;)
The day he'd left, Orlando had ( ... )
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Instead he put a hand around the back of Sean's head, fingers scratching through the hair there for a few moments, before he pulled Sean forward and planted a kiss softly on his forehead.
Awwwwww. [misty smile]
I can't help it, really. I'm just a sucker for mush. :)
Normally he would have been embarrassed by such a display, but somehow with Viggo it seemed okay.
And that means...? [raised eyebrow] Come on, Sean, we're way beyond hotness now! [glares and waves her rock painted with YOU THINK VIGGO'S HOT.] Damn, I'm going to have to repaint my rock. [heavy sigh]
"Do you want to change first, clean up a little?"
Wanna get naked in my trailer? Um, er, I mean... shower! Right, want to rinse the dust off? [bright, helpful smile]
a ribbed t-shirt that would be tight enough to make the wrinkles disappear when he put it on.
Of course that's his only reason for wanting to wear a T-shirt that tight. Uh-huh. Makes perfect sense. :) I think his subconscious is still working overtime to make ( ... )
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"You're not gonna stretch those out on me, are you? They're my favorite pair."
[busts a gut snickering!]
Sean tried to look offended. "Are you implying that I'm fat?"
NO, Sean, that is NOT what he's implying. [poke]
Sean felt his cock twitch and he took a step back. Fuck. Guess he noticed after all. "Sometimes..." he started, then faltered, staring back at Viggo.
"Yeah?" Viggo moved closer again.
"Sometimes I'm not sure if you're being serious or not."
[sigh] He comes so close, so close, so often.... [scream!]
And Sean didn't know why he said it, or why his heart was suddenly beating so hard.
Tell Sean I can write him an essay if he wants. I even promise not to use any words with more than two syllables. :/
Sean suddenly realized with the utmost clarity that it'd been foolish of him to try to out-flirt Viggo. He was way out of his depth on this one, and it was doing strange things to his mind and body that he hadn't quite figured out yet.Yes, Sean. We know. [rolling eyes] Forget the ( ... )
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heee...I think Viggo's already written one... :P
I need a club. A big one. With railroad spikes stuck through the business end. [glower]
LOL and EEK! *puts metal helmet on Sean* He'll get there, give the boy a chance! :P
[grin] OK, tell Viggo!muse that if he can't make some headway tonight, with this setup he's so expertly concocted, I'm going to wash my hands of him. :D
Give the guy a break....look what he has to work with!! *G*
Angie, who's discovered that her new purpose in life is to make Shriney laugh ;)
And you succeed admirably, m'dear! *hugs* *giggle* Thanks for all the fb!!
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ROFL ohmygod! Just hysterical! I want you to know that I'm such a fan of this story that when I saw there was a new part out, I did a little dance of joy in my living room with my dog. Which would have been fine except that the hubby walked into the room just as we were. heh. um so. Anyway, I love this story. I can't wait til the next part!
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I'm so glad you're enjoying this series...it's fun to write, even if this chapter gave me such a hard time!
I stopped writing just before the very end of the fic, and went and started dinner, so I could brew (hee!) over what would be a good ending...it suddenly occurred to me that I couldn't end it with schmoop...hee... Glad you found it funny! :P
*drools over your icon*
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Another wonderful chapter, Shriney! Loved it!! I was LMAO at Sean getting all hot and bothered by wearing Viggo's underwear and even more hot and bothered by thinking about Viggo wearing them... *giggles* God, I just love him. :D Viggo's line at the end is priceless. :)
And, oh god, now they're off to get drunk and Sean's already horny as all hell...
Okay, I'm ready for the next chapter now. :D
*snogs you*
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I actually wrote most of the rest of the next chapter before this one--because this was just supposed to be a short lead-in to it...hahahahaha...you'd think I'd have learned by now that I can't write anything short!
So hopefully I'll be able to finish the next one soon, but you all know better than to believe me on that score. *G*
Glad you're enjoying, hon'! *snogs you back*
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Repeat after me: Do not drink while reading anything Shriney has written. I should write this on a post-it and stick it on my screen. Of course apart from the mess on my screen, I pulled several muscles I didn't even know existed. *gr*
Man, I love your clueless!Sean. As angiepen said: I need a club!! A kingdom for a club. *gr* And crafty-and-otherworldly!Viggo is prizeless as well:
"My pen ran out," Viggo said, as if that explained everything. And it does explain everything because it is so Viggo-ish, isn't it?
As others have pointed out before: The last line is a killer-line. And you are the evil queen of cliffhangers. *gr*
Gosh, I dearly hope you are already working on the next chapter. The tension is killing me here. And with the sexual tension between the boys you could light a whole town. Even if Sean is still in denial about it all. *pets Sean*
Fantastic chapter - as always. *hugs you*
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Glad you like my Viggo-esque moments, and yes, poor Sean needs a good whack but I think understanding is starting to penetrate...we'll have to see... :P
The scary thing is that I wrote the next chapter before this one, because this part was just supposed to be a little lead-in to it...ooops. :P So now I have to tweak the next one to reflect what happened here...those damn muses, running away with the plot! :P
Thanks so much for your lovely fb! *hugs*
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