A Splitting of the Mind - Chapter 18

[shoved2agree]

Title: A Splitting Of The Mind [Chapter 18]
Author: shoved2agree
Pairing: Frank/Gerard
Rating: R/NC-17
Summary: Gerard Way sees the world differently. Alone and institutionalised, Gerard claims that he is being hunted, and that his mind holds the key to existence. Does Gerard really hold such a powerful secret? Or is he just insane like everyone else in the

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[clandestine_fey]

OMG UPDATE!!!!

[clandestine_fey]

THEY ARE HAPPY AGAIN, OH MY HEART!!!

Frank is getting looser around Gerard, which is so nice because he isn't doubting everything Gerard says, and I'm hoping it'll allow Gerard to stop feeling as though he's selfish for thinking about himself over Frank, because it's not always a selfish act to care for oneself. Also, Jasper being jealous of Frank is amazing.

I find the fact the Gerard knows that Jasper isn't real, but still believes in them intresting. Because it seems as though this idea of running away from them is so engraved into Gerard that he can't let go, even if he knows they are not real. Even for Frank, like when Frank told him they weren't real a few chapters back

[clandestine_fey]

Longer than I thought it would be. :D huh.

[shoved2agree]

Whoa, that is one awesome long comment!

Im so glad you liked that quote about the heart and machete but unfortunately I cannot claim ownership of it! I must credit it to equinescientist. I'll let her know you liked it :)

Thank you for commenting! You rock xx

[emo_panda_101]

I'm totally speechless! God! That pure epicness! I can't wait for the next update, you make me want more! I wish I had your writing talent, but sadly I don't. You make me speechless with every new update and I'm not kidding! <3 I love this story and I love you! <3<3<3

[shoved2agree]

Aw, there were so many nice things in that comment that I cannot pick just one to thank you for. So, I thank you for all of them.

Love you too ♥ thank youuuuuuu for commenting :D

[roxy_palace]

Fantastic! Just...God...My love for these two characters grows with every post. Awesome!

[shoved2agree]

C: Why, thank you. I love these characters to death. I'm kinda getting sad already about the inevitable end. But thank you for reading!

[runawaycharis]

I really, really have to go eat so I'll only leave you a short comment.
But this was absolutely amazing! I love how Gerard allowed himself to be in discomfort to help Frank. They're such amazing characters are you write them so, so well.
I can't wait for the next chapter :D <3

[shoved2agree]

Thank you, so much. I'm sure Gerard would do much worse things to help Frank ;) Thanks for the comment, bb ♥

[the_mourning]

Update! Yessss~

*goes to read :D*

[the_mourning]

Oh them! *___*

I'm so glad they're happy again! I'm totally pumped to see where this is going next~!

amazing work ^^

[shoved2agree]

Haha, your first comment about the update pretty much made my day when i got it at the time. I pumped about where it goes too! Hope it lives up to your expectations :D
Thanks for the comment, yeah :) ♥

[the_mourning]

:D You're welcome for the comment! And I don't know I'f i've said this but your icon is like my all-time favourite, lol