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Failure {Rukia-centric, Kaien, Ukitake}

Oct 08, 2011 13:07

Title: Failure
Fandom: Bleach
Characters: Rukia-centric, Kaien, Ukitake
Rating: PG
Word Count: 563
Summary: Rukia seeks forgiveness from her dead mentor.
A/N: Written for prompt #2: we can fix our mistakes, Table 21, 5_prompts.

( The man was now gone, his soul lost to oblivion. There was no way his corpse could emit such power. )

f: bleach, c: shiba kaien, c: ukitake jushiro, r: pg, c: kuchiki rukia, !fanfiction, g: gen, fc: 5_prompts

Comments 2

reimasa October 9 2011, 02:21:35 UTC

...That was amazing. The writing was phenomenal (and I'm incredibly picky), Rukia's emotions were described beautifully, and the style fit the somber tone. To put it simply, I love it. I've always wanted to read a fanfic about Rukia after Kaien's death, but there just aren't enough out there. This more than made up for it. Awesome job all around. :D

stharridan October 9 2011, 02:45:12 UTC

Thank you so very much for that! I remember writing another Rukia and Kaien tragedy!fic a while back, I think, so I just recycled the idea and sprinkled some spices on top to get this. XD

Glad you enjoyed it. x3 Thanks for the feedback! ♥