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The Morning Paper {Kenpachi/Jushiro}

Jun 28, 2011 05:29

Title: The Morning Paper
Pairing: Kenpachi/Jushiro
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2,497
Summary: Make sure that you've gotten everything indoors - mails, bills, the daily bottle of milk - before attempting anything else. Jushiro learns this the hard way. AU.
A/N: Written for prompt #5: milk of 7snogs and #87: paper of otp-100.

( I'm going to fuck you right here, is that all right? )

c: zaraki kenpachi, c: ukitake jushiro, fc: otp_100, fc: 7snogs, !fanfiction, r: nc-17, p: kenpachi/jushiro, g: yaoi

Comments 2

writerx75 June 29 2011, 02:13:40 UTC

Although this isn't a pairing I've read much for before, I really like the way you write them. I like how easily you describe their world and portray their differences, and I like the way that their contrasts actually seem to work to keep them together. Nicely done yummy hot sex, and a well-written piece all around.

stharridan June 29 2011, 12:32:18 UTC

Thank you very much! I like how different their personalities are, and I see Jushiro as being the one who's able to "mellow" Kenpachi out, thus making the relationship work. I'm usually not confident in writing smut, so it's great to hear that. Again, thank you for the feedback!