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The Hour of Separation {Ichigo/Orihime}

May 18, 2011 19:16

Title: The Hour of Separation
Pairing: Ichigo/Orihime
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 696
Summary: No matter what, her feelings towards him would always remain the same.
A/N: Written for prompt #2: a dying body of Table #9, 5_prompts.

( Sorry...Inoue... )

c: kurosaki ichigo, p: ichigo/orihime, !fanfiction, c: inoue orihime, g: het, r: pg-13, fc: 5_prompts

Comments 10

unwritten_icons May 19 2011, 18:10:08 UTC

I liked this one, you have a nice writing style and the imagery was wonderful.

stharridan May 20 2011, 15:52:35 UTC

Glad you liked it, though this was really just a quick whip up. Thank you for the feedback! :)

afteriwake May 19 2011, 20:13:52 UTC

Oh, this was such a wonderful and bittersweet story. Great job.

stharridan May 21 2011, 13:26:12 UTC

Thank you!

amorphic May 20 2011, 01:29:41 UTC

OMG. YOU WROTE ICHIGO/ORIHIME. AND IT WAS AWESOME. ♥♥♥ /loves you forever

stharridan May 21 2011, 13:26:33 UTC

XD You obsessed IchiHime fangirl!

kathy20121 May 20 2011, 20:44:02 UTC

Wow! This was really something! The way you put their feelings into words was magnificent! =)

stharridan May 21 2011, 13:25:36 UTC

Aw, thank you! I was in high doubts while writing this, but to hear such a comment makes me smile. :)

nypsy2 May 22 2011, 00:21:15 UTC

beautifully written, but damn, so tragic & sad.

stharridan May 22 2011, 00:29:25 UTC

Thank you! Tragic and sad is just how I like it. XD