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[ailynne]

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[syverce]

Watch for spelling issues, that's the only criticism I have. It's very visual, and I've always loved this sort of tone. If I flipped to any random page in a book and it read like this, I would probably pick it up.

[ailynne]

I've chucked it through the spell checker, sorry I was writing in notepad, and I rely on a dictionary within my browser but it didn't seem to come up when I pasted it on the livejournal box initially.

Thanks for that

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[ailynne]

Also thank you for the awesome praise XD