Comments | short_takes: Indecision - G, Malory/Jessi, complete

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Indecision - G, Malory/Jessi, complete

Dec 22, 2008 19:27

Title: Indecision
Author: Lauren
Rating: G
Pairing: Mallory/Jessi
Summary: Nothing's fair when you're eleven.
Author's notes: This got angsty. A lot more angsty than I would have intended. But better than I thought it would end. Written for amor_demi_alma, who wanted Mallory/Jessi, babysitting, a hug and Claire.

( what eleven year old isn't stupid? )

character: mallory pike, challenge: 17 - mallory, pairing: jessi/mallory, written for: amor_demi_alma, character: jessi ramsey

Comments 2

elisabeth_grace December 23 2008, 04:46:04 UTC

Aw, wow. I like how you've applied real life situations to the world that the Ann M. Martin tried to make so perfect. It makes them more likeable. And I like how selfless Mallory is.

amor_demi_alma January 5 2009, 19:34:47 UTC

Holy cow! I don't know how I missed this, but I did.
Thank you!!!
It's wonderful. I absolutely adore the angst. It's so emo! You're amazing. Thank you times ten thousand!