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Sep 02, 2008 03:30

Title: Liking it
Author: Wackyjacks20
Length: Just shy of 1300 words
Disclaimer: Yeah, not my characters.
For: escritoireazul, who wanted a story with werewolf movies, surfing, and coming out with positive results

( Liking it )

!challenge entry, pairing: abby/dawn, author: wackyjacks20, challenge: 12 - dawn, written for: escritoireazul, character: dawn schafer, character: abby stevenson

Comments 4

mayhap September 2 2008, 16:40:23 UTC

I'm liking it! (Sorry, I couldn't resist. *g*)

amor_demi_alma September 2 2008, 17:55:16 UTC

Cuuuute. Aaawww. *big smile*
I love how Abby "grins with her whole face". I can see it.

fizzyblogic September 2 2008, 18:55:22 UTC

I liked this a lot, especially the way Dawn's attraction to Abby was handled, and the way Abby could tell and didn't push it until Dawn seemed ready to talk about it. And the surfing! I love the idea of Dawn teaching Abby to surf. :)

escritoireazul September 4 2008, 00:04:15 UTC

This is AWESOME, thank you so much for writing it for me. I love how you've extrapolated their characterizations so well; Abby is so full of life and so interesting, and Dawn is a strong woman but still has her weaknesses, especially the way she gets all worried and lacks confidence around her crushes. The romance between them is wonderful, the sweetness of their kiss and the flirting at the beach. It was perfect.