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Not Bad by Chickwith_stick, Charlotte/Stacey, PG

Jul 20, 2008 23:25

Title: Not Bad
Author: Lauren
Rating: PG
Pairing: Charlotte/Stacey
Summary: Charlotte wasn't sure when it changed...
Author's notes: Written for dsharpe113. She wanted a happy ending, Charlotte in high school, and angst. I hope this lives up to her expectations. Parts of it felt a little awkward, and I hope the transitions aren't too abrupt. This came out ( Read more... )

!challenge entry, written for: dsharpe113, author: chickwith_stick, character: charlotte johanssen, pairing: charlotte/stacey, challenge: 10 - stacey, character: stacey mcgill

Comments 15

lilysela July 21 2008, 05:58:32 UTC

I can't see the story?!

chickwith_stick July 21 2008, 07:37:00 UTC

Heh, fixed. Thanks! Stupid HTML...

lilysela July 21 2008, 08:24:18 UTC

yay! I really liked the story, it was very sweet and very realistic too! Charlotte was perfect.

chickwith_stick July 21 2008, 09:41:41 UTC

Hehe, thank you! I found her voice really fun to do, if a little awkward. And thanks again for the html help.

dsharpe113 July 21 2008, 08:49:58 UTC

Yay! Thank you!! :)

I'm running behind on mine. It WILL get done though. Ugh.

chickwith_stick July 21 2008, 09:40:35 UTC

Does it retract from the fic that I wrote it in an hour tonight while people ran around my house and were generally chaotic?

Glad you liked.

gargyloveswolfy July 21 2008, 18:59:56 UTC

Hopefully, that's my fic you are talking about!! ;)

gargyloveswolfy July 21 2008, 18:47:15 UTC

The ending doesn't sound like an ending...it needs more, like a lot more....and you don't have to be graphic at all...but, come on where's the horizontal tango at?!
♥

chickwith_stick July 21 2008, 21:23:25 UTC

Somehow, being graphic with the BSC girls just isn't something I'm comfortable with. And the ending is meant to be like that.

gargyloveswolfy July 21 2008, 21:40:16 UTC

I must've confused you, I did not mean that as a "bad thing" it's just I'd like to read more to the story with or without the "graphic" horizontal tango. It's like the story could be multi-parts whether than just a one-shot. I honestly did not mean to offend you. I am sorry about that.
♥

chickwith_stick July 21 2008, 21:53:41 UTC

Oh, don't worry, I wasn't offended in the least. I'm flattered you'd want more of this fic. I couldn't decide if Stacey would return the feelings or not to be honest, and that's a major reason I left it unclear. I'm sorry if I came off as defensive, and it has nothing to do with my comments toward your fic. I just like to give constructive feedback, and I enjoy getting it in return.

midnightwriting July 21 2008, 20:20:40 UTC

Awww, this was sweet! I'm really not a Charlotte/Stacey shipper at all, but I enjoyed this take on it a lot. Very nice.

chickwith_stick July 21 2008, 21:25:00 UTC

Thank you! I wanted to approach it from a different angle. I kind of want to write a more casual one, set during the series. But then again, I'm sure you're familiar with my timeline preference by now :)

midnightwriting July 21 2008, 21:41:42 UTC

You should! That's what bsclove is for. Or maybe we should add a tag here for sequels/companions to things that get written for challenges... But I definitely liked your take on them.

dsharpe113 July 22 2008, 08:10:40 UTC

we're going to pull you over to the "dark side" haha. Just you wait ;)