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Claudia round- slightly late, but here it is

Jun 13, 2006 14:33

Title: Split Ends
Author: nybor4
Summary: For agirldetective, who wanted Claudia/Dawn during HS or college with Nancy Drew, California, and a mention of the Baby-sitters' Island Adventure.
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~3100

( I don't really know what happened here )

!challenge entry, written for: shinelikeastar, pairing: claudia/dawn, challenge: 04 - claudia, character: dawn schafer, author: nybor4, character: claudia kishi

Comments 9

velvetandlace June 13 2006, 21:34:30 UTC

This is lovely. There's a real rhythm to this, and a beautiful sense of creative exploration and affection. Just, yes.

nybor4 June 14 2006, 00:17:08 UTC

Thank you very much- that was definitely what I was hoping to accomplish. :)

midnightwriting June 13 2006, 22:21:32 UTC

Beautiful. I love it.

nybor4 June 13 2006, 23:54:36 UTC

Thank you very much. And yes, I do believe you do owe me an e-mail. ;-)

chickwith_stick June 14 2006, 07:25:55 UTC

I love this. The POV really added to it and I like their diologue.

nybor4 June 14 2006, 22:55:18 UTC

Thanks for the comment! Glad you enjoyed reading. :)

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nybor4 June 17 2006, 03:39:25 UTC

My Dawn is the vegetarian I wish I was- I'm such an unhealthy veggie. I blame it on the fact that I'm poor and in college.

Thank you for the comment- glad you enjoyed the story. :)

polarenigma August 5 2006, 04:07:03 UTC

To be quite honest I was little weary but there was something that drew me in. This was beautiful and I'm glad I read it.