Merlin fic: Little Moments; Arthur/Gwen 1/1

[shootingstars88]

Title: Little Moments
Author: shootingstars88
Characters/Pairing: Arthur/Gwen
Rating: G
Disclaimer: All characters/settings etc property of the BBC
Spoilers: 2x03
A/N: I swore I wouldn't get into the Merlin fandom. Clearly I failed. As a result - my first Merlin fic, a missing scene for 2x03 and an attempt to get into the head of everybody's favourite prat, Arthur.

Comments

[imigination]

That was fantastic! It fit what actually happened perfectly, and I like how you explored the motivations for that conversation with Merlin. It gives Arthur's words a little more weight now. Great job. :)

[shootingstars88]

Thanks very much :) I'm really glad you felt it fit well with what we saw happen.

[archaeologist_d]

I liked how you showed Arthur and all his misgivings. Loved the last line. Of course, it has to stop but it won't.

[shootingstars88]

Thanks :) I'm just starting to get a feel for this pairing so I'm glad you liked this look at Arthur.

Yeah, I'm a sucker for forbidden romances :)

[shootingstars88]

Thanks so much for this :) I'm new to writing for this pairing so I'm glad the characterisation worked for you!

Also, your icon is lovely!

[irrel]

This was perfect :D I think you captured Arthur's voice very well. I hope you write more now that you've succumbed to the fandom!

[shootingstars88]

Thanks so much :) I'm really glad you liked the characterisation here, because it's always hard to start writing for a new fandom.

And yeah, I'm totally sucked in now. I've already got another fic idea bouncing around begging to be written!

[starry_laa]

Wonderful. I especially love the scene of Gwen dropping what was in her hands down the stairs, and her embarrassment.

[shootingstars88]

Thanks so much :) I'm glad you enjoyed!