♥Wow. Just, WOW. The ending especially. It ends and yet it hints at continuation. I am babbling in coherently, yes. Is there going to be a next chapter? :D
*twirls* I'm SO happy that you enjoyed this. I don't know if there is more to this particular story, but I won't kick it out of bed if it comes to me...:D (how could I? I thought they were incredibly sexy all angsty and dark like this)
I was wondering what you meant when you wrote dark and smut, but now I know. IDK why, but I like the idea of a dark relationship between Akame and I love how you portrayed their relationship from Jin's POV (now that I think about it, it would be lovely to get to know what Kame was feeling). How their relationship was now just want, and maybe it always was? Or did love just fade away...? *Sweatdrops* I need to stop asking questions. ^-^;;; But Jin kept on talking about how beautiful Kame's body was and how good he was at sex like that's all that mattered. *Smacks Jin* And as always I just love your descriptions! *Hugs* *Love for writing* ♥
but I like the idea of a dark relationship between Akame and I love how you portrayed their relationship from Jin's POV (now that I think about it, it would be lovely to get to know what Kame was feeling).
I would love to have written something more about Kame's perspective here, but this was just all about Jin being a bitch. He was completely selfish and he absolutely objectified Kame, right up to the end. He only wanted to satisfy his desires, regardless of the emotional cost - because even if he knew that he was making things worse, he didn't care. It's like Kame was only what he could do for Jin in the end. Which is horrible. *shudder* Of course I don't really think that Jin is that evil in real life, thank goodness.
I need to stop asking questions. ^-^;;;
Nooooo! You never need to do that. :) We can smack Jin together, ne? What a brat. Thank you SO much for your lovely comment, and I'm so glad you like this! *hugs YOU*
I love angry sex in fanfics. It sounds so perverted but angry sex requires such a variety of intense emotions that it always manages to hit hard.
Your descriptions were wonderful. The way Kame's hair fell or Jin's posture against the door...it worked well together to depict that tense aura between them. I could feel Kame's anger and how it slowly became eclipsed with desperate lust but never disappeared. I really had a wonderful time reading this fic.
I liked it that you didn't provide a reason for their 'fight.' Why they stopped speaking to each other. I think having to explain that would have taken away from the tense atmosphere you built. It would have entailed taking the reader outside of that moment.
I love angry sex in fanfics. It sounds so perverted but angry sex requires such a variety of intense emotions that it always manages to hit hard.
I agree - it makes good dramatic sense!
Thank you so much for your incredibly kind and fabulous comment - I'm really glad you like this. Most of the time these things come to me like a little movie playing in my head, so I just write it down as I see it, and I had that opening part so vividly in my mind's eye: Kame infuriated at the sink and Jin, nervous but predatory, leaning against the door.
And seme Kame is awesome!
That's how Kame is in my head, most of the time. And in this, I absolutely knew that that's how I wanted it to end, with Jin on his knees, and then Jin being taken from behind. Kame was pushed too far, and this is what happens when you mess with him...Jin's not too bright, hmmm? ;)
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I would love to have written something more about Kame's perspective here, but this was just all about Jin being a bitch. He was completely selfish and he absolutely objectified Kame, right up to the end. He only wanted to satisfy his desires, regardless of the emotional cost - because even if he knew that he was making things worse, he didn't care. It's like Kame was only what he could do for Jin in the end. Which is horrible. *shudder* Of course I don't really think that Jin is that evil in real life, thank goodness.
I need to stop asking questions. ^-^;;;
Nooooo! You never need to do that. :) We can smack Jin together, ne? What a brat. Thank you SO much for your lovely comment, and I'm so glad you like this! *hugs YOU*
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It suits my mood perfectly right now. although i didn't expect Kame to be seme at the end haha
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Oooooh, nice. Thank you! So glad you like! And in my head, Kame tops most of the time. Oh, yes. :)
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Thank you! :)
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Your descriptions were wonderful. The way Kame's hair fell or Jin's posture against the door...it worked well together to depict that tense aura between them. I could feel Kame's anger and how it slowly became eclipsed with desperate lust but never disappeared. I really had a wonderful time reading this fic.
I liked it that you didn't provide a reason for their 'fight.' Why they stopped speaking to each other. I think having to explain that would have taken away from the tense atmosphere you built. It would have entailed taking the reader outside of that moment.
*breathes* Good stuff. And seme Kame is awesome!
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I agree - it makes good dramatic sense!
Thank you so much for your incredibly kind and fabulous comment - I'm really glad you like this. Most of the time these things come to me like a little movie playing in my head, so I just write it down as I see it, and I had that opening part so vividly in my mind's eye: Kame infuriated at the sink and Jin, nervous but predatory, leaning against the door.
And seme Kame is awesome!
That's how Kame is in my head, most of the time. And in this, I absolutely knew that that's how I wanted it to end, with Jin on his knees, and then Jin being taken from behind. Kame was pushed too far, and this is what happens when you mess with him...Jin's not too bright, hmmm? ;)
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