Comments | shonn: Peek-A-Boo

shonn

Peek-A-Boo | Criminal Minds

Jul 02, 2010 16:52

Title: Peek-A-Boo
Author: Cj
Fandom | Pairing: Criminal Minds | Emily/J.J.
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: not really
Disclaimer: Criminal Minds belongs to The Mark Gordon Company, CBS Television Studios, and ABC Studios.
A/N: Will never should have happened.
A/N 2: This was an entry in the The FemSlash Advent Calendar :: Dog Days of Summer 2010.
( Read more... )

j.j./em, fic, cm

Comments 26

joran July 3 2010, 03:23:51 UTC

I love this. I read it on my iPhone in bed but then discovered it's too hard to actually type feedback on that thing.

First, GARCIA. AMAZING. From her seeking Morgan to her merciless torture of Emily, she's just perfectly in character. And vibrant.

And then Emily, so forlorn. Just like her character. You captured that...vibe. That sort of inwardness about her.

And then JJ the flirt! Hee! I love her plan.

This was a pleasure. I don't feel coherent, but it brightened my life.

shonn July 3 2010, 22:19:51 UTC

I live for your feedback. But, you know that already.

I'm so glad you liked this! I'm finding these characters really easy to write, especially Emily. J.J. remains my favorite, but I've come to appreciate Emily more since I've been writing her.

And, of course, Garcia is just fun!

Thank you.

joran July 4 2010, 04:24:55 UTC

I'm so glad you liked this! I'm finding these characters really easy to write, especially Emily. J.J. remains my favorite, but I've come to appreciate Emily more since I've been writing her.

This is good news... for me. :D

bsofthewest July 3 2010, 16:43:28 UTC

I LOVE that you are writing more now!

shonn July 3 2010, 22:20:13 UTC

lol. Thank you! Me, too.

talos13 July 3 2010, 22:58:14 UTC

Aw, this is lovely. It's well-written and you keep all three of our lovely ladies believable and in character.
And thanks for the mental image of JJ in a bikini, yum!

shonn July 3 2010, 23:06:17 UTC

lol. J.J. in a bikini is the perfect way to spend the day.

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

malexfaith July 3 2010, 23:03:41 UTC

I've read this a few times now, but it's just the type of fic you go back to over and over again. I love it. Thanks heaps for sharing

shonn July 3 2010, 23:11:25 UTC

Thank you. That's a great compliment. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

dumbstruckk July 4 2010, 02:49:01 UTC

Ohh Em and JJ. <3 *squeee* LOL

I LOVE this story so much! You wrote the girls perfectly.

shonn July 5 2010, 22:24:41 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.