Pete Swallows a Fly 1/1

[shojohanzaisha]

Title: Pete Swallows a Fly
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Pete/Patrick. Pete/Spencer
Summary: Pete is restless and offers Spencer two hundred dollars to suck him off. Spencer makes him buy him coffee first.
Warnings: It’s really weird.
Notes: Inspired by a scene in “Coin Locker Babies” by Ryu Murakami.

Comments

[runthegamut]

WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO DO ME??? Oh my gooooooood. When did you even have time to write this? Now I feel really disturbed. Sadly, though, I can see Pete feeling like this and the stuff he's been writing about exploding but it's happening too slow for anyone to notice? Is not helping the bad feeling I have right now. Awwwww, PETE!

Okay. Even though you're messing with my head, I liked this a lot, liked both things you wrote tonight. I'm just unable to form the right words.

[book_of_calm]

Well, at least nobody's cutting off bits of themselves or making plans for killing the entire human race!

I hope.

This captures the atmosphere of the book really well, I think, and I can sort of see Pete being Hashi-like, although that isn't a notion I'd like to dwell on, honestly. It's too depressing. ;_;

[shojohanzaisha]

:D Thanks very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
The idea of Pete being like Hashi struck me while I was reading the novel, so I wanted to write something dealing with it. It is a pretty depressing thought though. D:

[lucentvictrola]

I've never read the book, but this really touched me. It made me want to cry. Now I must go read that book!