Batman, Batman / Gordon, G

Nov 10, 2008 18:13

Title: Playing Dead
Pairing: Batman/Jim Gordon (Implied)
Prompt: No. 45: Escapes you perfected, playing dead, playing
stupid, playing blind, deaf, weak, strong,
playing girl, playing boy, playing native, foreign,
in love, out of love, playing crazy, sane.
- Li-Young Lee
Summary: Set just after Commissioner Gordon "died" in The Dark Knight.
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genre: angst, pairing: batman/gordon, misc: challenges, fandom: batman

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destinyawakened November 11 2008, 02:49:02 UTC
OH MY GOD! this was simple, yet amazing and beautifully written! oh, I just don't have words for how much i love this. *adds to memory favorites*

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blacktofade November 11 2008, 03:29:18 UTC
Thank you, you're extremely kind! :)

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theloyalist November 11 2008, 05:17:46 UTC
wow. utterly beautiful. i've often wondered how and where gordon hid himself.

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blacktofade November 11 2008, 07:28:35 UTC
Thank you!

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brushed_velvet November 11 2008, 11:28:44 UTC
Oooooh, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!

I love how you melded the two 'play dead' instances together especially Jim wondering if Batman had moved on like his friends did way back when.

His guilt kept him company

Such a simple yet wonderful line. This is a great missing scene.

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blacktofade November 11 2008, 17:33:20 UTC
Thank you for your wonderful comment! :)

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skep November 11 2008, 11:50:48 UTC
You know how much I hate giving incoherent feedback, but when it comes to your fics I am always left with one thought: you, and this, are brilliant. <3

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blacktofade November 11 2008, 17:34:06 UTC
:D Thanks!

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mistressmarilyn November 16 2008, 19:46:57 UTC
Great scene. I love the subtle tension between Gordon and Batman and the almost careful way he allows himself to think about it. Only in his dreams can he really feel it.

Very nice.

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